[Report This]Date: August 24 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 6: Hot Bath.
I like the almost consequence free nature of this whole thing. Sure she's tormenting and killing tiny people, but they're basically just tiny little clones of the real people. So she's not actually killing them for real.
I think a rather humorous action she could take in the coming chapters would be to let one of the mini people get offed unknowingly by their larger selves.
Date: August 24 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 6: Hot Bath.
Yay, another chapter. I'm seriously loving Nina's playful attitude and treatment to the little people. And now she's going to share it with someone else? Hell yea, I an't wait to read that. Thanks for the shoutout, BillMann. I always get happy to hear other people enjoying my stuff. Your stuff is great too. I love me some cruel treatment of micros.
Date: August 22 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures
Thanks for the feedback everyone.
Gadget, having you tell me my story is good must mean I'm doing something right, I'm a fan of your works.
[Report This]Date: August 16 2014 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 5: Two Kinds of Shark
Holy crap I loved this story. Nina is my kind of girl!
[Report This]Date: July 06 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures
A very unexpected twist to Shark, but certainly a pleasure! I love how engaging your writing is, managing to tease the imagination in ways that help to really define the giantess and give her her own personality. The pacing is also impressive, keeping the suspense built for each new action, and leaving the reader wanting more by the end of the chapter. I can't wait to see what she's got planned beyond bath time!
[Report This]Date: July 04 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures
I like this story, though I have to say that image of what she did in the latest chapter (vag shark) is rather humorous to picture.
[Report This]Date: July 04 2014 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 5: Two Kinds of Shark
I love it. It's very creative, I think.
Date: June 21 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures
Thank you for writing and contributing thus far such a captivating story. I have no complaints at the moment since you're doing such a fabulous job. Let's keep it that way!
[Report This]Date: June 19 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures
Absolutely excellent. One of the best stories I've seen in quite some time.
[Report This]Date: June 19 2014 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 3: Into Turbulent Sea
Smaller, more frequent updates sounds perfect, especially if they're all this good! Once again you've delivered the goods in an engaging and descriptive way. I loved what you did with the navel play! I'm looking forward to learning the rules of Shark, though I bet they won't be at all fair.
[Report This]Date: June 18 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures
I'm generally not a huge fan of fatal violence in my macrophilia, but this is one of those rare stories where I really love it! Nina's sadism is seductive, and she clearly knows how to use her body to the detriment of her tiny victims. I'm a huge fan of breast torture, so the story already started out on a great note for me, and hope there's more in store at some point. The second chapter was short and sweet, and built a great, tense atmosphere. I love how she talks down to the tinnies, especially in the second chapter. I can't wait to see what she has planned for the bath (maybe some navel action?)! Please, keep up the wonderful work!
Author's Response:
Thanks, and yeh, I had already made provisions for a bit of both.
Date: June 18 2014 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures
I absolutely love the way you're doing this. Micro can be a hard category to tackle but you're doing it so gracefully.
You may not be into spoilers and if you're not, please feel free to disregard this question, but might any of them be visiting/living in Nina's ass anytime soon?
Author's Response:
The tags include Butt for a jolly good reason, expect it in the next ch.
[Report This]Date: June 17 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 2: Dainty Malevolence
Excellent read, keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: June 17 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures
A simple premise handled it very well.
The problem a lot of authors here have is pacing; their lines are too short, too long, or have choppy transitions from paragraph to paragraph. But your story has a definite flow to it; a logically progressing sequence with a buildup of tension, every event escalating before they reach a climax. And you leave enough up to the reader while providing sufficient details and a wide enough vocabulary without being overly verbose. It's got variety, even if it's just describing a few simple events.
You definitely know how to use the medium. Honestly, my only complaint is that it seems so self-contained and complete in itself, I can't see how you'll keep the audience hooked next chapter.
But I'm sure I will soon~
[Report This]Date: June 17 2014 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures
Incredibly well written, excellent work here! I look forward to reading more whenever it's ready!
Date: June 16 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures
I love it. It's not paced too fast, or too slow. It's believable. I can't wait for chapter 2.
[Report This]Date: June 16 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures
Superb. Can't wait for the next addition!
[Report This]Date: June 16 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures
This has some definite promise.
[Report This]Date: June 16 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures
Amazing! I wonder... is it possible for Nina to vary the sizes of the people as she pleases? I'm thinking like.. maybe would it be be possible to make them so small that there is, say, an entire city in the box? Also, I may have missed it, but how old is Nina? I caught that she's younger than the senior, but by how much?
Author's Response:
I havent written it as such yet, but once I've made it past the story outline I have so far I could certainly make it so. The idea crossed my mind, and I think it would be a good way to expand the story scope. As for her age, I haven't exactly pegged it down anywhere other than being on the lower end of the age category. Tis the sort of thing I'll leave up to the reader's preference and the story's progression.