Reviews For Omega: Inheritance
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Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2014 5:19 AM Title: Address

Only read through chapter 2 so far and I'm horrified. Absolutely horrified. Whatever happened to innocent until proven guilty? Clearly, Lexi is innocent. Arg, I just feel so bad for her. Bridget is a terrible, terrible person to treat her friend this way and I sense it will only get worse!

Unfortunately, however, I'm hooked and have to find out what happens.

I do have a message for Bridget: Take it easy on your friend. REMEMBER that she's your friend. Or at least she was. Give Lexi a chance to explain. Hear her side of the story!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Horror is definitely a good feeling, considering what the situation is.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2014 6:10 AM Title: Address

I like this story, but it brings up a interesting question. How come there are no trials for these situations?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! And Ackbar's got your answer above.

Reviewer: Moonpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 7:11 PM Title: Address

I can see things turning into something like the Salem witch trials. With betas using omegas to punish alphas they may not like or something by lying about things and possible hurting themselves in order to achieve this. Good stuff

Author's Response:

Definitely an unsettling comparison! Thanks for reading/reviewing.

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 3:26 PM Title: Address

The system the Omegas are using seem a little messed up.  Their superiors seem to think its a good idea for their enforcers to participate in cases where they have personal stakes.  Claire's brother is assaulted, so she gets to punish the attackers.  Bridget's best friend is involved in an assault, so Bridget punishes her friend.  Conflict of interest?  Relationships destroyed, a chance that punishment might not equal the crime for good or bad.  No chance to defend yourself and face your accusers.  With this kind of system its a wonder why the Alphas tolerate it, and there not being more unrest.  I wonder if Kayla will eventually get involved if it becomes clear that an innocent was punished.  I was hoping the system was fair and equitable for all, but it appears that Alphas may in fact be the oppressed people now.  I'm still little nervous about how this story will go, but its interesting enough to continue.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. I'd say it's a fair reaction to question aspects of the justice system here, though there is a reason Bridget was allowed to handle her friend that'll be shown in a later chapter. I would suggest it's jumping the gun to say Alphas are oppressed here, but given how wrong this particular case seems to be going, I can see where that thought comes from.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 3:16 PM Title: Address

This would be a scary situation to be in, and I wouldn't be at all surprised if it hurt Alexandra's opinion of Omegas. Maybe even instilled some apprehension.



Author's Response:

It's probably fair to say she's not going to be quite as comfortable around Omegas as she once was.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 2:58 PM Title: Address

Booze played a part possibly or somebody really is sending her up the river for their crimes.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 11:29 AM Title: Address

I think someone set Alexandra up but for what reason I have no clue.

Also I wonder if the flame inside Bridget is conflicting with the doubt she has regarding the culpability of her friend. 

 



Author's Response:

Guess we'll just have to wait and see.  Good considerations to have, though.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 9:17 AM Title: Address

Yep, this will be painful. I am already feelings the hairs on my neck standinf up although Bridget doesn't seem to want to do this either. No matter what her tone I can sense it. 



Author's Response:

Sounds like you're sensing correctly. Thanks for reviewing!

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