[Report This]Date: September 17 2014 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1: ORPHANS ... AND OTHER ORIGINS
Wow. So surreal. Will the entire story have the underlying tension that Ann is going to eat Martin at the end? How cruel! I realize he agreed to it, but still. She seems like a sensible woman. Maybe she's going to regurgitate him. I certainly hope so. Otherwise, why would Martin agree to such a thing? He doesn't appear depressed in his speech here.
Let's just hope her story is a long one. Let's hope Martin changes his mind before we reach the end. And finally, let's hope she shows him mercy.
Author's Response:
I'm flattered that this got reviewed before chapter 124 of the prequel story actually. It must have really caught people's attention.
Well "Yes" to the first question, and I was originally going to make it even more of a vore piece by having the whole story carry the underlying tension that she would eat him without his agreement. Imagine him hearing her happy life story knowing that.
I just realised it wouldn't be consistent with the Ann O'Malley of "Captain Miniature and the Red Moll Conundrum" chapter 1 onwards.
The only thing to do was to make him a voraphile such as myself, who would be looking forward to it, or it least, willing to do it as an act of love for her. But yes, their surreal dialogue will respond to her 1953 flashback narrative at various points throughout, although not that frequently, until his big scene in 1996 at the end. (However, that's 79 chapters away).