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Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2014 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 7: THE PLASTIFER ORB

"As Wendell is stuck on Ann's earth, we won't learn more about him"

Why not? That seems odd. I mean, he is a character in nearly every chapter.

I'm a bit surprised Ann doesn't have Butler One call her Ann, instead of Miss O'Malley.

Also, the chapter titles seem off. Chapter 6 is titled Meet Butler One but we don't learn the robot's name until Chapter 7. Plus Chapter 7's title of Plastifier Orb is wierd since almost nothing happens with the orb.

That said, I do like how she made him into a robot. Creative. Also a bit scary. Butler One has a laser and stun cannon as arms?? How will he interact with stuff without hands? I guess he can certainly blow stuff up. Curious to see what happens next.

 



Author's Response:

 Well, to put it more specifically, we won't learn more about Earth-T, as the story isn't set there. We'll see Wendell all the way through for sure.

The robot's just being formal with Ann's surname. And plenty of interesting stuff will happen next.

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