[Report This]Date: September 26 2014 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 9: THE TRAVELLING SIDEKICK
Ack!
"gobble you down."
I don't know why that bothers me so much. It just seems so incongruous with the kindness of teenage Ann. I suppose they both share the same 'distanced' personality in some respect. However, the younger Ann would never gobble Wendell. It makes me sad because the reader doesn't know that there's any chance of survival after being eaten. I just wish there was some hint in the story that Martin might not die. Just *something*. Otherwise, it's like there's a dark, insidious background to all of Ann's actions which I know isn't your intention. Maybe she could say this line in chapter one: "You realize there is a certain level of risk involved with being eaten?" or something indicating there's at least a glimmer of hope of survival and that she cares a little about his predicament.
Author's Response:
A hint of survival. Remember all the teleportations out of giantesses tummies in the prequel "Captain Miniature and the Red Moll Conundrum."?
To me, it was the thought that the teenage Ann could turn into a voracious gobbler that was so thrilling. But then those of us with vore fantasies are just plain warped. LOL (especially when the warp leads us to a parallel earth. Double LOL).