Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 16: A TRIP TO THE TIP

I like the story within a story aspect of this...story. Even though Martin will be eaten, something about Ann talking with him interests me.

However, I'm a bit disappointed at the lack of interaction with Wendell. He doesn't do anything. He hardly even speaks. I expected him to at least help out with some of the smaller aspects involved in Butler One's repair. Hopefully he gets a larger part as the story progresses. Otherwise, that's too bad, because he seems like he'd be an interesting character.

Author's Response:

He's a supporting character involved now and then. I couldn't always think of something for him to do .... like Aquaman in the Superfriends LOL