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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2014 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 19: MAKING THE GRADE

Ann's half-right. Showing off, for any reason, is being needlessly cheeky.

Author's Response:

It was hard in this case to deal with the problem without becoming it, for Ann that is.

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 19: MAKING THE GRADE

Ann is abusing her exolimbs. She's seeking trouble instead of laying low. Her actions will only arouse suspicion. And what is Wendell doing while she's out showing off? Hopefully she doesn't keep in trapped like a caged animal. She shouldn't have sparred with Mary knowing that Wendell was in her pocket. Her actions are reckless and uncaring, perhaps typical for a girl her age, but I expected a higher level of maturity and awareness. She has an opportunity to do great good, but she's jeopardizing it.



Author's Response:

Well actually, maybe the author just wasn't showing any thought or maturity at this stage. All your points are well taken.

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