[Report This]Date: October 12 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 23: LOOK WHAT THEY'VE DONE TO MY CAR!
So you went in and out of that house, and I’ll be going into your tummy
Lines like this keep me interested in this book. I have to know what happens at the end. It's like watching Anakin Skywalker before he turned to the Dark Side, but worse.
Ann punishes Adam in a juvenile way but she's far from sinister. She tries to do the right thing. However if she truly intends to eat Martin, that changes things. It doesn't matter if he teleports out safely or not. If the story doesn't say that Martin teleports to safety, then it didn't happen.
Finally even if Martin does teleport out in the story, that's irrelevant if Ann doesn't know about it. What matters is what Ann thinks. Does she THINK Martin will die in her stomach? If yes, then this becomes one of the most macabre stories I've ever read. Not because of Martin's method of demise, but because of Ann's mental shift. It would be like Superman, the most annoyingly GOOD comic book character, deciding to start melting the faces of criminals instead of putting them in jail, and not even being the least bit disturbed by his own actions.
If Ann becomes the heartless face of evil at the end of this book, I'll be crushed and saddened. The anticipation to know what happens draws me in like a magnet. Ann, please don't become a murderer!
Author's Response:
In my recent stories, I've had the idea that gts women have a separate safe compartment in the front of their stomach, with no acids, so no digestion, no death, just a little guy living in there forever. As for the apparent contradictions in Ann's character over time, I've done them deliberately, because, it's one of the things that arouses a guy who is into vore. What I liked most about Star Wars was the older woman / younger man romance with Anakin and Padme, also Natalie Portman's sweetness back then. She has a rather seasoned almost feminist look on the cover of Thor The Dark World.