:) hey by the way?
if I may say so myself?
I do Have, somewhat of a talent and am quite gifted, in electronic music production.
I have thus decided, haha Because I can?
I hav just started working on a little dance track, in dedication to the story. :)
The title I have decided upon, is the jingle in her belly!
I'll send you a dropbox link to the mixed down result when I have finnished editing.
Got to take my mind off my broken heart somehow! haha :)

Author's Response:

Great! I can't wait to hear it!

The first suggestion would be great too :) I like the idea of Tommy going through the cups, sorting them out, and have this kind of "good felling" inside of him, that the helped and the ones he put to the side were clean. I like it that he acts like a typical teenager boy who would do careless or not so logical things, which lead to micros getting vored for example in this case, also them being his friends is a great adding.

Oh, but that would have been the best thing happening, aha :') I thought that would hae made a fanatastic plot twist and fitting so well Tommy getting new prepared dry clothers that way. And also that he unknonwingly would swallow the ant sized Mark in a plastic cup of drink and that way Mark would get send through Tommys digestive tract as a retour for the wet pool prank. You dont have to thank me for anything!! I like reviewing your amazing work :') Looking forward so much for the next parts :)

I've liked this entire series and this story is shaping up to be pretty good. I especially like that you've put two main characters in such distressing danger. Makes everything far more interesting. I'm just waiting for Mark to get what's coming to him. Hopefully it will be an especially horrible vore death. I predict that Bobby and Francine will be given to someone like Jenny who will be stopped by Tommy just in time. Can't wait for more =)

I really liked The Party, but not the starving aspect of it. I am not a fan of "big bellies", "baby ballies"or call it starving, because it's a little bit unrealistic to me. I like normal flat bellies much much more, especially on cute girls ^_^ Hope you wont focus too much on the starving thing, but it's already nice to see youre putting in much more unaware vore! Hope to see some onion dip part and "a swim in a party cup". I guess this story wont be around Tommy having a new gf, so that's already a nice idea for whats coming after this story! Thank you again so much for finally writing again, Ive missed your work, really. Hope for a soon next chapter :)) <3

Sounds like it's going to be 1 hell of a Christmas party indeed!
Can I go too? haha :) love it.
Cant wate for chapter 2.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'll try to have Chapter 2 up soon!

I love these stories. So well told, sometimes and good vore scenes. I'm happy you're making another one.