Reviews For The Shoe Clerk
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 10: An Angry Mother

Dave is obviously the first guy to LOVE being treated as a foot-slave by these gals.

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2015 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 10: An Angry Mother

really nice story



Author's Response: Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2015 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 10: An Angry Mother

I am really liking this story so far and it's very good for a first. There are some spelling errors, but nothing too bad. Personally, I feel like things are moving kinda fast. I will definitely be keeping my eye on this one!

Author's Response:

Thank you. Yeah I'm sorry for the grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that occassionally happens. Sorry if the pace is fast. I just wasn't sure how much I wanted to do or exactly what I am doing. I'm just kind of wingin' it one chapter at a time. Thanks for reading.

Oh and I have read most or all of your stories before creating this account and I enjoyed them. Thanks again.

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