Reviews For The Shoe Clerk
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 10: An Angry Mother
Date: January 22 2015 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 10: An Angry Mother
Dave is obviously the first guy to LOVE being treated as a foot-slave by these gals.
Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2015 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 10: An Angry Mother
Author's Response: Thanks for reading.
Date: January 11 2015 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 10: An Angry Mother
really nice story
Author's Response: Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2015 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 10: An Angry Mother
Date: January 11 2015 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 10: An Angry Mother
I am really liking this story so far and it's very good for a first. There are some spelling errors, but nothing too bad. Personally, I feel like things are moving kinda fast. I will definitely be keeping my eye on this one!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Yeah I'm sorry for the grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that occassionally happens. Sorry if the pace is fast. I just wasn't sure how much I wanted to do or exactly what I am doing. I'm just kind of wingin' it one chapter at a time. Thanks for reading.
Oh and I have read most or all of your stories before creating this account and I enjoyed them. Thanks again.