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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 20: Pure Pleasure

The alternate first-person pov's weren't bad. Who knows? They might even enhance things if he gets shrunken by Laura, again!

Author's Response:

Okay well I'll probably continue them at some point in the story due to personal preference. Thanks for your input and thanks for reading.

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