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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2015 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 23: The Backstory

Parthenogenesis, huh? I love it when real-world science gets thrown into the mix!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2015 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 23: The Backstory

Doesn't have to be Laura, I'm just into sexy milfs. I actually really liked it when the sisters were drunk and going and forcing Jen to do whatever they wanted.

aaron

Author's Response: Ok well you should like the upcoming chapters then. Stay tuned :)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2015 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 23: The Backstory

The hunt is on. Great chapter. And nice explanation for their heights. I didn't necessarily want the others to grow I was just curious as to why they hadn't and you've answered that.
Since they are all basically family will he embrace his role more later?

aaron
PS will Laura shrink any women with her serum? I'd like to see her have her way with a tiny woman.

Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback. I really appreciate it. I'll try to incorporate some girl on girl. Does it have to be Laura though. Just curious. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2015 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 23: The Backstory

The truth finally comes out! Not exactly what I was expecting, which is good. I like being surprised. Kinda disappointed the twins won't get any bigger, but that's just me. Also, I would really love to hear more of your opinions on my stories sometime. I crave feedback haha

Author's Response: I feel ya. Glad you were surprised! Ill reread some of your stories.

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