Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 9:58 PM Title: Lena I (UPDATED)

That was a much better reaction. Glad you updated it. He's not stupid, so he can easily see she's trying to manipulate him. She's not stupid, so she can tell she came on way too strong.

This new method she's going for is more subtle, and I like it.

I still hope he tells Magina. Putting in a negative evaluation at work is fine and all, but she also needs reigning in by her sister.

Author's Response: Thanks Jimbob, glad you liked the update! This definitely makes more sense.