Date: February 21 2020 1:52 PM Title: Prologue
This is one of my favourite stories on this site . I hope sometime you get back to writing these, it’s a great concept
Date: June 10 2015 11:32 AM Title: Prologue
This seemed like a good light hearted end to a nice light hearted story. I had so much fun reading it and I can tell that you had fun writing it. Congratulations on completing your story, now if only I could complete mine.
Date: June 05 2015 10:27 AM Title: Prologue
good ending with everyone happy, can't wait your next story and update.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you liked the ending.
Date: May 31 2015 10:42 AM Title: Prologue
Still got at least 14 chapters to go on my other two stories but I could end it by July where I'll begin planning my next phase of stories, lets see where it takes me. I'll contact you about it, a story in this universe has been weighing on my mind for a while now. I just need an idea to run with for about 10 chapters. Most likely with a Singapore guy since I am from Singapore.
Author's Response:
That sounds very interesting, really. Good luck with your stories and feel free to contact me whenever you want.
Date: May 29 2015 8:24 AM Title: Prologue
If I have time, I might do a story set in this series. I just might....
Author's Response:
It'd be really interesting to read a story from someone else in this same set. Let me know if you ever have the time.
Date: May 26 2015 10:13 AM Title: Prologue
Nooooo Freckle, stay safe!
Author's Response:
Hehehe, I love it how people cheer for Freckles. Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: May 14 2015 6:15 AM Title: Prologue
Very entertaining story, with a great premise, I hope to see the girls interact with more people from different nationalities.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you like the story. I'm definitely using other nationalities, but as part of the series. But yes, I'm definitely using more of them in the future.
Date: May 06 2015 7:19 AM Title: Prologue
Aw man, Pablo is a womaniser and now he got caught. At least she still has Freckle, although I worry for the dog, it'll probably die in some unaware situation.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment. Again, sorry, but I don't want to give any spoilers. You'll have to find out later.
Date: April 30 2015 5:31 PM Title: Prologue
Wholia, thank you for the stories and this really cool world setting. Some people here treat it way too seriously but I find it really cool and fun and inspirational. I hope you keep writing. I have some ideas but don't wanna share it here. Anyway, thanks again, reading these stories has been real fun. Especially international love :)
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for your comment. I'm glad you liked it and the other stories too. It's really nice knowing all this writing isn't for nothing.
Date: April 28 2015 11:02 PM Title: Prologue
Its a real slap on the wrist but it does keep Chloe around long enough to have more fun with the tiny Mexicans.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment. It's the best I've got since last chapter, hehe. I hope you still like the story, because it seems I lost a couple of readers. Thanks again!
Date: April 21 2015 5:33 PM Title: Prologue
I don't care about what anyone says about JJ, he and Chloe sleeping in the bed togehter, and her cuddled up on him was adorable!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you liked him. I think he's a nice addition to the story.
Date: April 20 2015 8:12 PM Title: Prologue
@smoki, I really hope something like that happens. They were throwing people hard enough to make them skip on the water... that has got to be painful and terrifying. They need to know there are consequences for their actions.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment. Like I said before, I don't want to reveal any spoilers. But again, thanks for reading.
Date: April 08 2015 12:20 PM Title: Prologue
Oh my Chloe, that is pushing it! SHe really deserves to get her ass kicked!
Author's Response:
Hehehe, yeah, she does. Thanks for your comment.
Date: April 08 2015 10:10 AM Title: Prologue
good chapter with chloe on top of bitchness lol anyways there no need of report of tiny guard to expel 2 troublemakers from the hotel. If people that they took as stone complaint all together, they are gone. Can't for the next Linda vs Bianca!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment. Glad you liked the chapter.
Date: April 02 2015 1:17 PM Title: Prologue
Please let those three giant girls get what's coming to them, or at least feel incredibly guilty. They're being bitches and bullies, and I find myself actually rooting for Bianca.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment. I don't think Donna is being a bitch. She's more like a childish girl. Linda and Bianca are sort of being bitches to each other, although Linda has the upper hand. Chloe is totally a bitch, though. I guess we'll have to wait and see how things end up for them. Anyway, I appreciate you telling me what you think. Thanks again for commenting and hope you like the rest of the story.
Date: April 02 2015 12:13 PM Title: Prologue
Damn Bianca, let it go. Linda may have been a bit of a jerk at the start but this is pushing it!Loved the contest and how Linda was able to beat the defending champion with her final routine.
Author's Response:
I think this is more about a rivalry than just the first encounter. Still, thanks for your comment and I'm glad you liked it.
Date: April 02 2015 11:40 AM Title: Prologue
Loved the t-shirt contest, so much fun
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for your comment.
Date: April 02 2015 9:20 AM Title: Prologue
good chapter!even if Bianca should have won the contest because she's more skilled but hey it's gts story ! Can't wait for the next chap!!!
Author's Response:
Oh, I agree. Bianca is more skilled and deserved the win. But wet T-shirt contests usually are for fun and to please the crowds, so it makes sense they picked Linda, I think. Still, I appreciate your comment and I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: March 28 2015 11:39 AM Title: Prologue
I'm really liking this story, always happy to see a new chapter added!
Author's Response:
I'm trying to add them as soon as possible. Thanks for commenting.
Date: March 24 2015 12:14 PM Title: Prologue
My guess was right Chloe is a "badass" hehe. good chap continue!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment. And yeah, she is, hehe.