[Report This]Date: March 18 2015 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: Dealing with locals (Part 1)
More. Please. I'm waiting
Author's Response:
I'll add more as soon as possible, I promise.
[Report This]Date: March 14 2015 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Dealing with locals (Part 1)
Very good chapter! Will the girls meet any other people besides Mexicans?
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you liked the chapter. As for other people...I don't want to give away spoilers. But you'll find out. Sorry!
Date: March 14 2015 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Dealing with locals (Part 1)
I love multi-sized worlds and the gentle but playful and teasing tone you have going here. Will definitely be checking out future chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment. It's super nice to see there are people who don't mind if the story doesn't have evil and cruel giants. I hope you like the rest of the story.
Date: March 14 2015 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 1: Dealing with locals (Part 1)
Now this was a blast to read. I don't think Linda was being too mean, the yellow bikini girl was being overly aggressive towards her and she merely paid her back in kind.
As for what the girl could do to her, I checked the charts and Americans are far from the largest of the sizes listed so that tiny little girl could have a Dutch or Scandinavian friend to make Linda pay.
Not that I like the tiny girl so whatever they do to Linda, I'll feel bad for her.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment. I'm really glad you liked this chapter. I don't want to give any spoilers about what will happen next, but you'll find out later. I also don't think Linda was too mean. She might have overdone it a little, but she didn't start it. I'm glad you like the character, too. Thanks again!