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Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 2: Dealing with locals (Part 2)

Donna playing with the kids was super cute. Loved the "gigante" attacking the castle.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I had a lot of fun writing it.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 2: Dealing with locals (Part 2)

Love this chapter. Her playing with the local kids was just adorable, though her decision to set up a slip and slide in the tiny area was really ill-conceived and her tantrum was definitely petty. Like this story so far and I hope it keeps with the mostly gentle nature. They're people, just smaller, and the two characters you've featured so far have been careful around them, so far.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for your comment. I'm glad you like it. The whole tantrum and slide stuff was her being childish and immature, not evil or anything like that. I really hope you like the rest of the story and thanks again for commenting.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2015 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 2: Dealing with locals (Part 2)

I bet the 3rd girl will be less clement if attack!hehe



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment. I hope you like the next chapter.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2015 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 2: Dealing with locals (Part 2)

So one humiliated a Mexican, the other got humiliated by them. This is interesting. Wonder what our third girl will get?



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. Well, we'll just have to wait and see. ;)

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