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Reviewer: Kosmita Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2015 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Mangrove

I read this story in one sitting. I was about to review when I saw this chapter added. I'm liking it so far even though 'gentle' stories aren't my thang. The little world you created is intriguing in that different nationalities are certain sizes. I don't understand the method to the madness though. Like, why neighboring nations have drastic changes in their size. That, and the whole resort catering to different sizes while the locals come to visit the same beaches as gigantic tourist. ANYWAY, I can always overlook that kind of stuff if the story is entertaining -- and it is. Oh, and Chloe's playfulness in this chapter was awesome. Also, introducing a giant companion is even better. I love me some giant couple scenes. Good job, hope to see more from ya.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your comment. It's very flattering that you like the story even when gentle isn't your thing. I know that some stuff doesn't make much sense. All this has been addressed in another story. I know what you mean. For example, as someone else pointed out in that other story, countries like North Korea and South Korea being different size wouldn't make any sense. I'm not really focusing on how it all came to be. It's just a hypothetical scenario where every country has a different size. I know I'm asking the reader to overlook a couple of things, but if you think about it, all these stories are doing the same. For example, how can a giant person not be crushed under their own weight? There are a lot of size mechanics that wouldn't work in real life, so I don't think it's such a big deal if it's weird that neighboring nations have different sizes or stuff like that. That's just the scenario.

Anyway, thanks a lot for taking the time to comment all this. It means a lot that you care enough to write a whole paragraph about it. I always appreciate this kind of comments, whatever they say. I'm very happy that you liked this new chapter, and that introducing a male giant was actually positive. The whole idea of this story is, like you said, entertain; so it's great to see it's working. Thanks again for your comment and hope you like the rest of the story.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2015 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Mangrove

Wow... what a bitch. I am honestly hoping that Chloe gets what's coming to her. Attacking innocent vacationers like that... definitely can't be legal.



Author's Response:

Of course that's not legal. And yeah, she's a bitch. Stay tuned to see what happens to her next.

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