Reviews For Spring Breakers
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Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2015 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 9: Legal Issues

I did only voiced my view i didn't stop reading you I only expected a harder punishement for chloe. Looking forward for next (specialy Bianca vs Linda).



Author's Response:

I'm not complaining, but usually when people want something to happen and it doesn't, they start losing interest. Good to know it's not your case. Thanks again for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2015 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 9: Legal Issues

Bullshit. That slap on the wrist is complete bullshit. I refuse to believe that nobody she harassed and assaulted the previous day filed a report.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. I'm sorry to hear that you think it's bullshit. But like I said before, if you have problems believing this story, then this probably isn't for you. Anyway, thanks for taking the time to read it.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2015 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 9: Legal Issues

I knew deportation is excluded but I meant, you could've made her pay financially or make her apologies. Letting her actions on mangrove be unpunished is not credible sorry to say that. However, i like the story, just hope for more justice!



Author's Response:

The story itself is not credible. Like people have pointed out before, this whole thing about countries with such different sizes would never work in real life as I'm putting it in the story. It's supposed to be fun in a silly way. I'm sorry if you don't like that, but I'd have to fix much more things if I was aiming for credibility. That said, thanks for taking the time to comment and I'm glad you at least like the story.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2015 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 9: Legal Issues

When I read the title chapter, I thought chloe was gonna what she deserve but you let her go with just a warning pfffffff. unfair.Or chloe will faces complaints about her action on mangrove? 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. I'm sorry if it wasn't enough punishment for her, but being deported or the like would have make the story a bit hard to continue, wouldn't it? Anyway, I hope you still like the story.

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