Date: June 05 2015 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 13 & Epilogue: Moctezuma's Revenge
Fun story. The drinking from the swimming pool was pretty funny. And I like that after everything they did to each other, Linda still jumped to Bianca's rescue.
I feel like there should have been some consequences for all the mischief the girls were making. Then again the cops couldn't do anything to them. That was the part of this setting I couldn't quite wrap my brain around. The big people can do whatever they want in this society. It's fine for some basically harmless spring breakers but what keeps more malicious people from running amok in the tiny countries? Or prevents a giant land from conquering a smaller one?
Ah well, I'm probably over-analyzing this (I tend to do that). Bottom line, it was a good story!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you liked the story. And you're not over-analyzing, I understand this story has many problems of that kind. However, it'd be super hard for me to make things so that no one would abuse their size. I mean, in our world, countries attack other countries, and they're all the same size. I know there should have been consequences, but I wasn't sure of how to handle it. I guess I didn't think this story needed it, but I'm definitely doing something about it in my other stories. I also don't like this whole "giants can do whatever they want thing", so I'm fixing it for my next stories, one way or another.
Thanks again for taking the time to comment and to read the story in general. I know this isn't the place but (like most people here) I'm a big fan of your stories. I'm glad you comment because I was actually inspired by them to write mine, so thank you.
[Report This]Date: June 05 2015 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 13 & Epilogue: Moctezuma's Revenge
The epilogue really sealed this as being a truly great story. Can't wait to see what you've in store for us next.
aaron
PS could you consider doing a story with a milf giantess?
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment. I really appreciate it. As for the milf giantess, I honestly don't know. I'm struggling enough with what I already have, so I really couldn't say. Maybe, but I make no promises. Thanks again for your comment.
Date: June 05 2015 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 13 & Epilogue: Moctezuma's Revenge
Really fun, a lot of loose ends got tied up and I cannot wait for your next one. Maybe finish International Love?
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you liked the ending. I'm definitely going to finish International Love. Like I said before, I'm a bit stuck with it at the moment, so I'm still thinking about a way to deal with it. But definitely in my plans.