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Reviewer: psychotropic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2016 3:40 AM Title: Making Plans

This story is amazing. It's the exact detailed unaware story I love. Your description of Ellen's running shoes in Chapter 2 and 3 made me feel I was right there. The cigarette scene? Just wonderful. This is easily now one of my favorite stories here.



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I appreicate the feedback and everything! 

Reviewer: millimeter_man Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2016 10:46 PM Title: Making Plans

This is by far my favorite story in ages. Your writing style is amazing and I love your details! Please keep up this wonderful work. I check back on it every night. As an aside, will he ever have contact with the giants or just through extension? (Shoes, fork, etc)

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!! In this story...probably not, but I'm not going to rule it out. I haven't planned out all the specifics yet, and I am trying to make each chapter unique in it's own regard so it very well might happen, but I'm not actively seeking out for it to occur.

Reviewer: DarcKage Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 4:24 AM Title: Making Plans

I really hope Rose will make an appearance sometime soon.

 

Loving the story so far, keep it up. =)



Author's Response:

Not to spoil anything, but we'll be hearing about Rose in the near future!

Reviewer: Skechers Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2016 7:09 AM Title: Making Plans

What a cheesy chapter!  Lol.  How many employees does this shop have?  What happened to Rachel and Ellen?  

 

Guygonesmall, gonna finish Tiny with Melissa?



Author's Response:

There are thirteen employees at the store during the current time frame the story is going on at. We may or not may encounter all of them. 

Reviewer: Thorsson Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2015 3:12 PM Title: Making Plans

Great story so far I do hope you continue. One of the best scenarios I've read!!

Reviewer: Skechers Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2015 5:34 PM Title: Making Plans

Could you describe Rachaels sneakers?  Love unaware and sneakers.  I daydream about scenarios like this all the time!



Author's Response:

I don't think you'll have to worry about that, hehe.

Reviewer: Vord Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2015 5:10 PM Title: Making Plans

Loving the build up, despite the short chapter, can't wait to see what's next!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I generally like the beginning to be short and sweet. It was a little shorter than I first thought but there's still a lot of stuff to come. 

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