Another fantastic chapter!

Whenever I see the "graphic" warning, I cheer. To me, that means that the fun is about to begin.

Once again, the emotion is great, but I think it was a little too much. Kinda glad that giantess brought them back to reality with those footsteps.

Carly is going deep with Dan. She is planning it all out, her future, Dan's future, and also she planned out the results as Dan becomes chief.

One of the best kiss scenes I have seen in a long time on this site. 10/10.

I think Connor likes the giantess. He doesn't mind the torture. Of course, it's worse than his military training, but this is the kind of torture that you wouldn't mind telling your friends.

So the giantess's name is Linda. Man that's going to confuse me later on, especially when there's a character named Lindsey already.

Speaking of Lindsey, I love her idea. I think it's a great transition to give these tiny people a chance at knowing what's in the city. Even if they won't find Connor, this trip should definately be a learning experience.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

The group seems remarkably casual given the magnitude of the situation. They are upbeat in spite of the harshness, and I like that. Hopefully the mission will go smoothly and they won't suffer a crushing defeat.

The emotion is incredible in this chapter! The dialogue, the language, and the ability to communicate over life and death. Amazing!

I like what Connor did. He resisted the giantess's methods of interrogation and didn't reveal the tiny people's village. Now that's the sign of a good soldier.

I think Lindsey likes Connor in a way that Carly likes Dan. The love is too strong that they don't want to be separated.

Planting a C4 in her arm?!! I can't even picture that, and it's sounds impossible! Yet if there was one person who could do it, it defiantely would be Lindsey.

Personally, I don't want these guys to rescue Connor. I want to see these giantesses abuse him! I love that the girl wanted him as a sex toy, and in addition will subject him to torture from other women. Incredible! I am really interested in what these women will do to Connor. Let's hope it's some sort of sexy interrogation.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

I freaking love this story!

Dan is an awesome character, and it makes me want to believe in him.

Carly sounds like his wife rather than a best friend.

I like this dual world situation where the giantesses and the tinies live on the same planet and how the giantesses hunt the tinies.

Lindsey and Connor are interesting characters. They act like people that you just want revenge on, but they also are agressive enough that you need them on a mission like this.

I would say Connor is super lucky. Being placed in the panties of a giantess teenager who is almost done being a teenager. I'm gonna guess that she is 19. Her age defiantely would cast a spell on the tiny men. Yep, Connor is lucky.

In addition, I enjoy that you made the giantess really smart. Most giantess stories feature smart tinies and dumb giantesses. However, this smart giantess is new to me, and I like it.

Dan blacked out from that? He is going to have a difficult time if he gets captured again. He has to fight that fear and conquer it, in order to survive. I wish him the best.

I hope we can get the perspective of Connor soon. He is in an interesting situation. I guess he is also going to the city. I wonder if she will show Connor to other people.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Ok, you've got my complete attention there. It's such a good and promissing start, please don't disappoint us..
Haha, just kidding. I always appreciate all the effort an author takes to write a story and this seems to be of nice quality in general. Good job ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you for expressing interest! -BP

I really like the concept you got going on here! I'm interested in what happens next.

Quite a nice start, I'm excited to see more.

Author's Response: Thank you -BP