Reviews For Jewels Of The Sky
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Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2015 6:19 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

 I think I was the one who said Eris was unbelievably sexy, it was the vibe I got despite seeing so little of her. 



Author's Response:

Yes, it was you. However I didn't want to mention you by name in that context, without your permission. What is it that makes her sexy? Anything in particular? I'm not exactually sure since I've just writing about the sort of character I planned.

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2015 9:42 PM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

I like the plot building. Hoping for another chapter as good as this one.



Author's Response:

The next chapter is much longer and I can inform you that there are giantesses in that chapter. Whether or not it will be a good as this one is hard to say. But people here like giantesses, so my guess is yes.

Reviewer: Dracobrss Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2015 7:59 PM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

Not a bad setup! I look forward to a more action oriented story like this and I'm really glad to see you've started writing your story. Anyway I don't have much to comment on the plot thus far, I'll wait and see what else is to come first. Anyway keep it up the good work!



Author's Response:

It's so nice to hear from you. I've been discussing the plot with the wonderful Nostory. We've had a healthy debate on the story and it's been very helpful. Once I've written chapter three I think I'll feel ready to post the next part. I was always afraid to post this story in case I ever get bored of writing it, but if you like it then that's an incentive to keep going.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2015 6:33 PM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

Got the email you sent, will reply when I've digested it. 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2015 10:50 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

Prolific reviewer yes, writer not so much but I'd love to help out. You can send me the chapter whenever you're ready.



Author's Response:

I have used the contact button on your profile here to send you a message. Hopefully you will recieve an e-mail. Thank you for your interest.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2015 10:27 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

Oh sorry, I meant shouldn't go but wanted to say stay. Got it all mixed up. Reviews definitely do help, its nice to see people leaving comments. Hope you finish it, this one feels like it is going to be great. 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2015 10:06 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

Also would like to say you're right, you shouldn't stay because of a few dubious stories. 



Author's Response:

Don't you mean, "you shouldn't go because of a few dubious stories". The website had so many anomalies it feels like it's slowly crumbling. However, Giantess City doesn't appeciate literature as much as the members here do. There's a lot going on in my life right now, and I'm trying to learn Daz3D too, but hopefully I'll be able to conclude this story. I always used to shy away from writing multiple chapter stories because I was afraid I'd gradually lose interest in them. I guess getting lots of nice reviews would be a motivation though.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2015 9:09 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

Eris, Greek goddess of chaos up to no good here. Sidney seems to know she is a giantess and I can't wait to see her and know what makes this self-proclaimed goddess tick. 

Sidney seems fleshed out and good thing too since he'll be carrying the story for a bit. Great to see you writing again!



Author's Response:

I've potentially commited myself to a new story. I haven't actually done that much character planning but if you think Sidney is "fleshed out" then thank you. Maybe I can blurr the lines between good and evil with this story.

 

Eris is the name the woman has given herself. She is not actually the Eris of the Greeks. All of the giant women in this story are named after Greek goddesses. Their origins will obviously become apparnt as the story progresses. We briefly encounter Eris in the next chapter, which I am curently editing, but after that she dissapears again. Seeing as you're a prolific writer and reviewer, and you appear to have a great interest in this story, I could send you the chapter for analysis/feedback (before I upload it) if you like.

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