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Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2015 4:52 AM Title: Check. Up.

Excellent story thus far! When did you find time to write 45 chapters?!

The strength increase does surprise me a bit. Given how easily she manipulated the high tensile steel, her hands can exert over 100,000 pounds per square inch. That's an enormous amount of pressure (for comparison, the human jaw is 120 PSI). It's also far greater than the pressure caused being hit by a bullet.

So I'm curious how they drew her blood with a needle. :)

Sure, this is fiction and we can make stuff up, but I can't help but think about these things, lol. Great story tho, and I'm so glad I found it!!



Author's Response:

I wrote Goddess Resort July-September 2011, so it took about three months to write and edit the 66,000 words. Though it could certainly use some more editing. I think I was on a break from work at the time.

The strength increase was to bring in a bit of 'superpower' ala Supergirl. I agree there is a bit of contradiction between their extreme strength and drawing blood. Might be better to have the labtech fail with bent needles. 

Glad you're enjoying the story! 

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