[Report This]Date: March 01 2017 4:25 AM Title: Who... are you?
It feels good to see stuff fall into place now with most, if not all, of the past revealed. I can see a nice constrast between the twins' attitude towards their friends before and now, saying things like "you must listen and follow us to the tee. If we say jump, you jump" in the past, which aren't exactly the most friendly words. It seems the twins have changed quite some in this time, for good I think.
What Claire and the other girls need now is time to process all this new information and see exactly how the twins have changed their life, specially Claire. Hopefully they can understand their reasons and maybe get to a good point in their relationship, I'm looking forward to see how all of this develops.
Now, sorry if this has been told before and I forgot about it but, Lily's wish hasn't been revealed yet, right? What about Lily's commentary on her and Claire being more similar than the older one thinks, was that because of both being part of the twins' scheme?
Great job as always.
Author's Response:
You're always quick to jump to conclusions, and most of them time their spot on lol. On regards to Lily's hidden wish, it's not just hers. The Twins had each of the girls tell them their deepest desires, and wishes. And each girl gave them one. What they are, will be revealed next chapter. I can't give away everything now can I? ~
Thank you for the review KentaRyu, i always look foward to reading yours. You read deeper then most and that excites me XD
As for Lily's commintary however, it was more that instead of Claire being just any other adult, she was like her. She was hurt, had been hurt. She was abused. She tried to run away. And... other, incidents that haven't fully been confirmed just yet. Make no mistakes, all the girls still have a lot that had happened in their past that hasn't been revealed yet. Whether it all eventually will be or i leave it up to the readers to figure out is still...
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[Report This]Date: February 28 2017 10:17 AM Title: Who... are you?
The words are raw and unedited, but the story siezes control and doesn't let go. Every character in the sizable cast has a distinct personality. Themes of betrayal and forgiveness are leveraged skillfully to create a masterpiece of storytelling. The saddest part, by far, is that the story is drawing to a close. Of course, it's already the length of two full novels, but I don't want it to end. I want to see Claire reunite and forgive (of course), but also how the plan unfolds, how things are five years from now, and so much more. Maybe if I leave a review after every chapter, you'll just keep writing them. :)
Author's Response:
Hehe, if i had kept with the story path i set out when i first started this i might have just held you up on that offer. But sadly, or i should say thankfully i was stopped a few chapters in and the story by far has made me happy as a whole where it otherwise might not have. Thank you for reviewing SpookyTaco. I know even with my work being edited by F.W. there's still a lot of mistakes i make he isn't able to fix for me... :(
But i'll edevor none the less to fix them and make it better for people to read with time! Your review was kind and informative where i need to better myself. So once again, thank you.
[Report This]Date: February 28 2017 12:17 AM Title: Who... are you?
They may have the power to do anything they want, and to punish anyone they want, but do they have the right to? They used thier "friends" and now they must reap the "rewards".
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're still here with me Frozenbutt. They have made mistakes yes, and the outcome was as followed. It's just time to see where the die fall and what numbers land on for them all.
Date: February 27 2017 12:57 PM Title: Who... are you?
Jesus. Great chapter! I really loved these flashback chapters but I'm glad we're finally back to the main timeline. The insight they gave was really cool to read with the characters having each of their beginnings revealed. Anyhow, this story keeps on getting better and better and I hope the next chapters will keep that status. Thank you for dedicating time to write these. They're fantastic and I can't wait for the next one ;)
Author's Response: And thank you for dedicating your time back to tell me that. :) I'll try my hardest to have a new chapter finished soon!