Date: December 31 2017 8:56 PM Title: Ch. 5: Oh, Loving Sister!
all the story isn't here
Date: November 12 2015 2:57 AM Title: Ch. 7: The Amazing Human Maxi-Pad!
chapter 7 has good 'pad' content
[Report This]Date: July 26 2009 8:17 PM Title: Ch. 1: The Finding
Good story, but you shouldn't give the chapters names, it makes it too predictable.
[Report This]Date: February 07 2007 1:02 AM Title: Ch. 1: The Finding
this was pretty unique and a great idea. I am curious to see how you expand on this. Lots of potential here.
Author's Response: Thank you! The game plan is at about 34-35 chapters eventually, but that could easily change with this style of writing.
Date: February 07 2007 12:10 AM Title: Ch. 31: A Light Salad
I like the story lines.
However I find this style of choose-the-ending just too confusing to follow.
Author's Response: Thanks. The story is far from done, did you run in to dead ends? How might I make it less confusing?
[Report This]Date: February 06 2007 8:35 PM Title: Ch. 21: What Are The Odds?
This was a fun change! A couple chapters are missing in it, so you kinda have to choose one path over another.. but despite that i had a great time playing choose your own adventure, you should do more of these.. once you get all the chapters in this one of course.. Thank you!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! I plan on making some more of these; they're fun to write since I don't have to choose between different plotlines that I'd like to do.