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Reviewer: SpongeBob Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 26 2009 8:17 PM Title: Ch. 1: The Finding

Good story, but you shouldn't give the chapters names, it makes it too predictable.

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2007 1:02 AM Title: Ch. 1: The Finding

this was pretty unique and a great idea. I am curious to see how you expand on this. Lots of potential here.

Author's Response: Thank you!  The game plan is at about 34-35 chapters eventually, but that could easily change with this style of writing. 

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