A cute story thus far! I love the premise, and Mina is already incredibly endearing. I'll be looking forward to more!

One tiny nitpick thus far is actually just one word (see if you can guess what it is). That's right, pulchritudinous; it gave me a little laugh to see such an odd word thrown in there, but it also perhaps goes without saying that it gets in the way of the immersion, when the reader has to head to Google to learn what it even means. On that note as well, the definition appears to not just be a synonym for "beautiful"; it's a word that's only used to describe people, so I'm not sure if it's grammatically correct to use it in describing a body part. Though I do have you to thank for introducing me to the word, now!