Reviewer: threedots Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2020 2:32 PM Title: VIII - A New Face

Hol-lee smokes. I never thought I'd see this updated again. I happened upon this story months ago and I keep coming back to it. Particularly the chapters 2 and 3. The "unaware" is done perfectly. I could read an entire story of just tinies disappearing under the principal's notice. The fact that the tinies can take some abuse before caving in gives them a feeling of hope that maybe they can escape, only for it to come crashing down.

 

I like the "nice until her hand is forced" aspect you've given the principle. Opens up the story to the possibility of her doing that to other parents/students if they threaten serious repurcussions. And of course the method of disposal itself can be quite varied.

 

Hopefully this wasn't too ramble-y. I guess this is just the bottled up appreciation for this series spilling out all at once. Keep doing your thing man.

 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, the fact that you enjoy this means everything and drives me to keep writing.