[Report This]Date: December 13 2017 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow! That's how this story end? Sondra forever floating in limbo confused and teased and lost and tiny!. You're horrible! Why did you ask me to read this?! I have to know how this end?! How will Wendy live with herself when this is over! Will Sondra be shrunk forever! I really feel bad she was dealt such horrible cards for basically all her life. Now one unfair curse and she's shrunk with nothing to live for but the girl she loves!........This was a bait and switch! BAIT AND SWITCH!
Author's Response:
Uh...sorry? I thought you'd like it?
Really, I have the next chapter 90 percent...well...80 percent if you count the serious re-edit it needs...maybe 75. Anyway, I'm not done with this story and I do plan to continue. I have one little project I'm going to be posting first. That's gonna be done, finished ...complete.. before I post though. None of this business of ...not doneness....there's enough not doneness going on around here.
Yes, Sondra's plight is a rough one. Tinies have it rough on this site. I'm big on rough. And who say's Wendy will live? Huh?
Really, though, I appreciate you taking the time to give feedback. I enjoy your work a bunch and you commenting means a lot to me.
pix
[Report This]Date: July 06 2017 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well-written story.
Most enjoyable and orignial.
I look forward to its continuation.
Author's Response:
Thank you SafetyPin. I really appreciate you taking the time to comment. I hope I can keep you enjoying.
[Report This]Date: July 06 2017 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 11
Pix, this is quite, quite brilliant. Complex, difficult, moving, bewildering, powerful, and brilliantly written. Up there as one of the best chapters of size fiction I've read, honestly. Completely worth the wait, and now waiting, excitedly, for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you imagin8, your work seems to fit your review a lot too. Thank you for being so kind and I hope you will have more to enjoy soon.
Date: July 06 2017 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
YES!!! Still love how you've created this super dynamic between the two girls, almost fencing with one another while attempting to establish more definable boundries. Nice natural sounding dialogue. Great job! Long chapter too, bonus.
Author's Response:
Pardon me wile I blush.
Thanks Duggernaut, this was a tough chapter and I really means a ton that you liked it.