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Reviewer: ILike Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2018 2:16 PM Title: Down the Stairs We Go!

please contiue

Reviewer: Medrinisoc Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2017 7:59 AM Title: Down the Stairs We Go!

Can't wait for the next chapter. I love the details, but I wish there were a bit more vivid descriptions of Casey. How does she look in the morning? Is she cute? What does Tom feel about his situation? What's Casey's morning breath like? Is there any food stuck in her mouth? Love your work so far, O hope you keep writing. Theis is one of the first good unaware detailed story about a girl's mouth.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I might just edit Chapter 2 and add your suggestions!

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