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Reviewer: vanillaTHUNDAR Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2017 12:32 PM Title: Of Failings and Showering

FINALLY, THE MOMEMT OF TRUTH AT LAST. I'VE BEEN GETTING SO ANXIOUS ABOUT WHETHER OR NOT ERIN FINDS OUT AND I AM JUST SO PUMPED THWT IT IS HAPPENING. I WAMT MORE, MAN. I WANT MORE

 



Author's Response:

It'll be up no later than Friday, August 4th! I'll begin editing it after I get off work tonight!

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2017 6:37 AM Title: Of Failings and Showering

Wow. I'm not really super in to the cruel stuff but this story is pretty excellent and great inspiration for me. My heart goes out to Faye. I sympathize with tinies. Of course that doesn't actually mean anything. Tinies rarely get what they want. Chances are she won't even survive to the end of this story. I guess that's hubris or something. Just don't give Erin a daughter and name her Faye because that is fucked up! Hanging on a thread for the final chapter, although I can guess where it goes. No idea what you'd plan for an epilogue. 



Author's Response:

The epilogue will mostly be pointing out little shit in the story that I felt wasn't resolved enough. I'm sure there are some questions that will go unanswered, but ill try not to leave too many! Oh, and it'll include a sex scene that I didn't feel fit properly into the main story!

 

*Quietly adds pregnant Erin to list of Epilogue stuff*

 

But does her pregnancy come from before or after she -- OOPS, SPOILERS.

 

I can't wait for everyone to read it tho!

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