Date: August 04 2017 1:59 PM Title: Of Judging and Jurors
This was definately one of the best SW stories I ever read. Thank you for sharing it with us, and I hope you continue posting here^^. You made me log in to write a review and I had to find my password :P. The details and immersion of all characters were awesome.
Author's Response:
And there's still one more chapter <3
[Report This]Date: August 03 2017 7:47 PM Title: Of Judging and Jurors
I think you write wonderfully. You have a fantastic style and you seemed to know where the story was going and I have to applaud you. This was a very good story. I will admit though that I hated Gwen and all of me wanted Erin to tell her to fuck off, but this is your story not mine. The fact that you could draw out an emotion like that out of me just goes to prove the quality of the writing. Great job! Looking forward to reading the epilogue. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
I kind of want to hate Gwen, too. Maybe that's the point?
I've always been one of those, 'True love,' people, so I hate to have written a story where someone tries to break up a couple of high school sweethearts, but it is what it is!
As for keeping it up, the epilogue is already the second longest chapter I've written, and will end up being far and away the longest chapter of the series. It might be up by Monday, as I hadn't intended it to be so long.
[Report This]Date: August 03 2017 1:41 PM Title: Of Judging and Jurors
This kind of ending is the sort of thing that really shakes me to my core about this fetish.
When you humanize the tiny to this degree and give them this full life and humanize them so much, it becomes so hard to see them go. This sort of thing makes me feel sick to think about, I don't know why, because I'd love to be in those shoes, but to see it happen to someone else, just gets me. I think it's that I can handle the physical abuse, but emotional and mental is too far, even for me.
Date: August 03 2017 10:26 AM Title: Of Judging and Jurors
OH! And that's how the news goes!...Unless there's some crazy epilogue twist but I doubt it!
Some thoughts: Poor Faye! She made WAAAAY too many rookie mistakes as a tiny. Should've been gone after that first night Gwen showed up. Did she forget she's just like every other of the suredly contless tines she probably swallowed as a human. Her memory will live on in.....well not a photo, Gwen probably torched those. Song? Yeah sure song. Maybe try harder next time?
Erin did nothing wrong. That is all.
Gwen's really insecure about a meager tiny for someone with such a huge dick. Just saying.
Great story about a widow finding love again after her wife tragically dies on her honeymoon! Unless I've gravely misinterpreted this story.....Hmmm..Looking forward to Monday!