[Report This]Date: October 05 2017 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hmmmm. Peyton might have messed up here. I mean she'll probably get away with it anyway, but you don't mess with cops. There should be a intensive follow up investigation into his disappearance. Why am I imagining some situation where Twerp starts a new family with officer Daniels? No way that'll happen right?
Geez these girls are kinda evil. Strange for someone as religious as Peyton. Although I do understand Peyton's animosity towards Nancy what's Avery's issue? Real talk. Nancy's done nothing to her but she's just on board. Maybe it's loyalty to Peyton. I can understand that. And shrinking a cop?! You can make some half assed, prance about justification for Nancy and Pig (Pig's real name forgotten) oh they deserved it for crossing Peyton or being a jerk dad. Officer Daniels is actually just an innocent. I wonder how Peyton will justify that and further delude herself.... How many chapters are left in this thing? I really need to stop commenting on this story. Peace out!
Author's Response: Avery is more of a follower. She Takes her cues from Peyton. She also looks up to her. If I had it to do all over again I would better illustrate that point. So Avery treats her as she does because that’s how Peyton treats her. I believe it got edited out but I may put it back in. Originally Avery comes downstairs and sees Peyton gettin arrested and without hesitation jumps on the police officer. She does that’s without a second thought because of the bond they share. Peyton and Avery have a ride or die relationship with each other. Realistically there would be an investigation however that thread is just about wrapped up. Officer Daniels is innocent. His only crime is being nosey. Peyton definitely will full regret later but she also views it as a means to an end. She didn’t want to go to jail. So she got out of it the only way she knew how. 17 chapters total. Not sure if I will do an epilogue. If I do that would be 18. However it’s fully written out with ending. 17 total chapters.
[Report This]Date: October 05 2017 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
Never stop writing about Peyton when you have the time, seriously her, Avery and Sab need to have an entire series built around their cruelty.
Bravo!
Author's Response: I plan on future tales involving them. Just wait till you see what’s to come.