[Report This]Date: September 02 2023 2:59 AM Title: Initiation Night
Recently discovered this story, and I’ve thoroughly enjoyed all the twists and turns so far! You’re really making an effort to keep me on my toes. I’ve got absolutely no way of telling where things will go next, and that’s definitely a good thing!
I also love your overall writing style. You do a great job conveying the sense of scale, and seamlessly transitioning from one size to another.
The (at times) massive size differences, and basic premise of the story (punishment by a giantess) makes this story feel like a raunchier version of the Omega stories (also on this site) by Ackbar and Jacksmith. Curious if you drew on those stories for inspiration?…
Author's Response:
Capturing the scale of relative size, no matter how extreme, is always my goal! And I love the most to do it in the context of the characters' sexual experience. To be a mote on a goddess' clit as she masturbates is an experience so violent, so visceral that I want to write it, but fear I could never do it justice.
I have never read anything by either Ackbar or Jacksmith, but I am looking forward to doing so, if you think my writing is like theirs. I am always eager to learn!