[Report This]Date: August 13 2016 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the imagery here. You work very well to capture the surreal massiveness of a normal human grown to titanic proportions. The awe that normal-sized people must feel when these exaggerated features come into view, the anticipation as more is revealed, their incomprehension at their speed and power all comes across very well. I especially appreciate the contrast between how sexy they should be, from a fantastic reader's perspective, and how overwhelmingly lethal and destructive they are.
[Report This]Date: June 02 2015 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Best story on this website
Author's Response:
Ah ah i wish it were true :-) Glad you enjoyed it, Single ! :-)
Date: February 06 2008 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was d/loading every chapter and glancing thru the contents until I reached part 4; then it started to get complex and rather boring. I went to chapter 10 and it was still boring. Sorry. BTW Females are blonde NOT blond. Blokes are blond.
Author's Response: hehe, in that case, i'm glad you "glanced thru", my friend, and i did not waste more of your time! :-) rest assured that since English is not my language, there are far more mistakes than you can quote! :-)
[Report This]Date: February 06 2008 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Also adding, I like that you are keeping the language and reasoning for they're presense a mystery.
Author's Response: Agreed again on this, my friend. I guess i wanted the story to be about people, as much as about giantesses, in a strange quirky way. ;-)
[Report This]Date: February 06 2008 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic story, especially the imagery. While reading it, I can clearly in my mind see what's going on in an epic movie monster style of cinematography. Kudos to you for this excellent story.
Another note: I like that you chose to make it just a specific amount of women, and not all women like some other new world order stories. Having men and women share in this conflict together really brings this story to a more believable level of story telling.
Author's Response: thank a lot for the kind comment, jimbob! I don't know if the story can ever be believable, but i still prefer to have all of us into it, rather that just us blokes! :-)
[Report This]Date: October 03 2007 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Man kind looks doomed no way of killing them yet. It does look like it's the end of the Earth as we know it. But i have this feeling things will turn around for the people.......maby not. Any way i hope to read more soon it is a very good story.
Author's Response: Thanks for your comment Angeloflife!
[Report This]Date: October 02 2007 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, so I can see why the nuclear option isn't that good (but still, nuclear blasts can range up to 3 kilometres in length and height. That's not even talking about the multiple re-entry vehicles with the set of nukes in the tip and the nuke itself)
The kind of the way the thing is worded, it sounds a lot like a zombie apocalyse, except the zombies are really tall and cannot die as easily as one should. Keep it up...
Author's Response: Hi Stylesrj, well, I'm affraid our conventional weapons are a bit short on this one ;-). can't beat the quantum physics! I did warn it was about the end of the world in the header,so yes, they are tough little giantesses ;-) But hey, i don't know why, i still have hope for the future. ;-) thanks for reading!!
Date: August 11 2007 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
quick question. do you figure on these gals being enlarged + new language because of a weird genetic sequence? Just wondering on the reasoning. The story itself is tons of fun. Personally I hope the giantesses dont all die, but its your story so keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
hehe, that's a big question. Somehow i don't think genetics can account for a new language ;-) killing all my giantesses would be an insult to bio-diversity. i'll try and be environmentally friendly if if i can. thanks for reading, man!
[Report This]Date: July 18 2007 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
A fantastic prelude to the the first chapter. I absolutely cna't wait to see what happens next. :)
Author's Response: thanks a mil for your feedback, theodous!! glad you like! Things are about to heat up a bit, i think ;-)
Date: July 17 2007 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Cool story so far hope to read more soon good job one thing i hope it ends one a good note where everone wins and not with a bad one where everone gets killed and they can't stope them i hope you don't take what i sed in a bad way am NOT trying to get you mad.But any way can't wait to read more of this story soon.BYE
Author's Response: thanks for the feedback, angeloflife! No worries, i have no reason to get mad :-) I honestly do not know how this is going to turn out in the in the end! Could be good, could be bad. Will depend on my mood that day i guess! ;-)
Date: July 12 2007 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
nice job so far Nostromo. i cant wait for the end.
Author's Response: Thanks, girlfood! :-)
[Report This]Date: July 06 2007 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for more. What the heck happened to the world?
Author's Response:
i'll try to anwser that question asap, stylesrj! ;-)
[Report This]Date: July 05 2007 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very good Nostomo. Compelling. suspenseful and a real turn on. I will be watching for more.
Author's Response: hey thanks, stanley! i'll try and add some more chapters i'm sure!