Date: December 02 2017 6:39 PM Title: A wife for her brother?
Hrmmm this is becoming very interesting now. I like this conversation between the two girls and the subtle changes in Justine's perspective. She's already using her size to control her friend and admitted to enjoying eating her father. She doesn't want to be called a monster but it's a slippery slope right now. I hope Christina's lie doesn't end with James in Justine's stomach. Actually I kind of worry for Christina too.
Author's Response:
I had wondered if I did a good job with Justine's change in perspective as she went on with the conversation or not. It was something I didn't quite feel settled with even after putting the chapter up so it's good to hear that it was fairly subtle.
Justine is walking a thin line right now with her choices and could easily end up sliding all the way down if she isn't thoughtful. As for James all I will say is he might end up down a diffrent kind of slippery slope if Justine becomes angry enough.
Chapter 6 and now the outlines of 7 & 8 has left me kind of uneasy with wondering where things will go from there. My guess is in a few days Chapter 6 will be posted.