[Report This]Date: December 08 2023 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Damn Ariel, I was all with up until you murdering your own sibling (fratricide).... and his friend in a girl's foot sweat. Lol! Thought she was supposed to be teaching them a life lesson not to look down on others. Not send them a Helldom.
Love the story, tho. Keep it up.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2023 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Damn Ariel, I was all with up until you murdering your own sibling (fratricide).... and his friend in a girl's foot sweat. Lol! Thought she was supposed to be teaching them a life lesson not to look down on others. Not send them a Helldom.
Love the story, tho. Keep it up.
Date: June 30 2018 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the story, the way you write is amazing. Though I was wondering if Mary is gonna get shrunk later on aswell
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. Mary is lucky enough that Ariel sympathizes with her, so she's off the hook
Date: May 30 2018 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
The last chapter was amazing, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks much!
Date: May 09 2018 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story and very well written.
Your a true asset for the gts community.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: May 08 2018 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Will you be continuing Time Out ?
Author's Response:
I expect so, but it's hard to say when, since I've sort of shifted focus over to commissions work this year
[Report This]Date: May 08 2018 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! Love your writing style and how you use the concept of magic to push your characters. My favourite so far was the curse on Nina, amazing!
Author's Response:
Glad you like it
Date: May 06 2018 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Was getting worried the story wouldn't continue! Amazing work as always! :D
Author's Response:
This is a commissioned work, so we'll reach the conclusion for sure.
Date: March 15 2018 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm curious to see what spells you will come up with to continue torturing him! The possibilities are endless
Author's Response:
There's plenty more fun to come
[Report This]Date: March 04 2018 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
My only complaint is that the chapters aren't ever very long with these commissions. Doesn't feel like there is enough time for you to get into the descriptions and details that make your stories great. Other than that, I'm enjoying this one.
Author's Response:
The pacing on many of these commission stories is definitely different than my own non-custom ones.
Date: February 23 2018 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm liking where this story is going. Will the incest tag come into play next chapter?
Author's Response:
Basically yes, but in a different context than one might normally think
[Report This]Date: February 19 2018 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice beginning of the story. Not very nice of them to make Ariel feel miserable for having sweaty feet. Especially not at the beginning of a story on this site!
Thank you for writing and see you next time!
Author's Response:
It's generally a bad idea to make jokes about any potential giantess's body parts on this site.
Date: February 18 2018 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent start, this sounds like it's gonna be a good one (as usual).
Author's Response:
Thanks; more to come soon
[Report This]Date: February 18 2018 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice story! Sibling stuff usually turns me off, so I pop these into Word and make some small character alterations for myself. This is great. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
After this current section, the majority of the story will be spent with people other than David's sister
Date: February 18 2018 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ah, now this sounds like it's gonna be good. I hope the commissioner asked for him to be trapped in some high heels
Author's Response:
Not quite, but there are several fun surprises to come