@shrinker82,

Yes! I loved how you described her figure and outfit. That outfit generally looks good on most women, so it’s a solid choice. Love how you described her wide hips. That’s one trait that should be very different from Rachel.

Lol, my suggestion was me anxious for some action with Janet. I was thinking about using Chris directly, but I think giving him a preview of the doll will make him more nervous when it actually happens.

I saw this one giantess video online and it showed this woman leave a vibrating sex toy in her pussy and she dressed up and left to a party. Of course, since I’m a giantess fan, I just imagined a tiny guy in that toy’s place and wrote that up.

I could have even made it more scary by describing the doll as realistic and looks just like a normal young man. And what if I said that doll looked very similar to Chris? Yep, a big smile appeared on my face too. Janet could fuck Chris without even knowing it.

While I like unaware moments, I find the aware moments the most memorable since the giantess could have a conversation with the tiny. With the situation with Noreen, I loved where Chris ended up and would have loved to see her actually realize it was Chris and then decide to keep him down there. Hopefully, we get Janet to play with Chris on purpose like Shannon.

Also, I noticed a trend that whenever someone steps on Chris, he gets stuck to the underside of their foot. So, in this next chapter you are writing, I’m pretty sure Chris is stuck to Janet’s foot, which means he will travel somewhere. At first I wrote about him in the laundry room, but just recently, I took the shortcut and had Janet head straight for the bedroom. I figured not much sexy stuff might happen during laundry expect Chris getting tangled with some dirty lingerie or something, but otherwise, the bedroom offers many more possibilities.

I just have to mention that the length of these chapters are incredible and the longer the better. I love reading this type of stuff and when it is with Mrs. Carson, longer chapters would be a blessing. Part of me wonders what got cut out now.

I’m really curious about the problem I solved with my suggestion. Perhaps it’s a “where to go from here” moment. Maybe “how to tease Chris” moment. I’m really curious of the problem, but no need to spoil the surprise. I’m excited.

So there is a bed scene! Honestly, I love it when stories focus on the bedroom because it’s similar to a love nest. It’s where the action happens. And this time Chris could be a part of it. Also, it’s probably the easier place for Janet to get naked and tease Chris about what kind of body he is dealing with. He already saw Rachel in a swimsuit so he knows how her body is shaped, but I imagine her mom to have the ideal woman’s body. If Chris thought Rachel got a stellar body, those genes originate from a much sexier one.

Also, the doll I mentioned in the suggestion was probably a whopping 7-8 inches tall, so I imagine her pussy to go really deep and to be able to swallow that large of a doll comfortbaly, makes it scarier to Chris. I should have had Janet accidentally drop the doll next to Chris so he could compare his own size to it. After all, he is only 1/4 inch size. (He should grow soon, haha.)

Noreen, obviously the super fit person, so Chris got a close experience of her working out. Maybe Janet could be the horny/naughty person with the lack of her husband and we see an assortment of toys and gadgets that she uses but she never feels fulfilled after using them. Her favorite one is obviously the doll, but she wishes the doll was alive. Imagine Mrs. Carson talking to herself, describing what she would do with an alive tiny doll while Chris is listening in the background. He better hope he doesn’t get found, but we all know we want him to be be caught.

Just some thoughts after reading your response to me review. I love discussing possibilities for this story. Especially when it involves Chris and Mrs. Carson!

Hmm. As far as suggestions go, I think the 2 ft tall Chris chapter with Mrs. Carson is still in queue to be uploaded. But due to Chris’s size at the moment, it will take a lot of chapters until that moment.

So in the meantime, maybe a 2 to 3 inch tall Chris in the hands of Noreen or Mrs. Carson would be great. They would be aware of him, and play with him. I think it’s easier with Mrs. Carson to be the sexy, naughty character since she is new, and Noreen seems kinda caring despite how much I badly want her to be naughty.

I guess I will stick with Mrs. Carson since I can literally dream up the sexiest and naughtiest woman out there and imagine it to be her. It was kinda what I was thinking of when I wrote that 2 ft tall suggestion earlier.

I could see Mrs. Carson take the 3 inch Chris and tape him to the inside front of her panties. Then she wears them while Chris is inside. She can tease him before hand, saying that Chris is a perverted, naughty boy that deserves to be punished. She can also say that he will spend the entire day trapped tightly against her. She can feel him squirming his precious little body into her, sending jolts of pleasure through her body. Stuff like that. Then she can go about her day while Chris is trapped inside. Shopping, going to work, crossing her legs, driving the car, watching a long movie, going to the bathroom, etc.

As for Noreen, I love how you used Chris as her gym toy. I could see her using him to train her pussy muscles. I know it sounds bizarre, but I think Chris being used in her workouts is kinda hot.

Noreen can do splits on top of him. She can do leg clamps, yoga poses, jogging, etc.

I can’t wait to meet Mrs. Carson soon. Getting excited just writing suggestions about her.

Author's Response: Alright, some good reminders and suggestions! Well, as long as they don’t interfere with the main plot lines, I think we can work something into the remainder of the story; But even if I can’t, I’ve got some great ideas for alternative story arcs. I’d like to get in a few more chapters before I post the next reader challenge so I have several jumping off points with the remaining characters. Thanks for your input!

I really enjoyed the whole ex boyfriend angle.  And rather feel her saying, "I'd of savored it." If she'd known she would end up crushing Steve. Which makes me wonder how the future will be. She could very well get more potion, shrink everyone and turn into a monster. Or, our little 14 year old could have his life in danger. However the winds blow, I look forward to the chapters to come ^^

First off  Great story! You could bring Rachel back into it somehow getting hold of him by visiting with a crunch on her boy next door now able to fit in her panties wanting to learn a little bit about her young needs. The idea of tied, glued or taped to the front of women's panties is the thing hh can't do anything they are in control. Possible for Shannon to find him and once on their own fix him too the front of her swimsuit gusset and catch so sun in the yard trapped there with the sun burning down she could gently rub him against her wanting pussy. Being really naughty could be time of the month stick him on a sanitary pad against a bloody vigina then change pad stick him to a new one start again! 

So you are taking suggestions for this new alternative chapter, but you don’t want comments in your reviews to reach 75 reviews? Hmm. Kinda contradictory. Lol.

I think you know which idea I kind of want so I’m not sure if I want to make a review/comment about what I want in an alternate chapter.

Also, this wasn’t updated to the most recent page, so I’m not sure if any of the other reviewers will see tour readers challenge. Even I didn’t see this challenge until I was going to ask what’s taking so long with the next chapter. And yes, when is the next chapter?

You also said the most popular choice gets chosen, which is really unfortunate in my opinion. On this website, everyone votes for the same choices for every story. I never win these. Well, I’m not sure about how this will turn out, but I’m excited.

Author's Response: I see the confusion. What I meant was I didn’t just want one-word reviews/comments. I’m always open to suggestions, especially yours. But, what I’ll most likely end up doing is reposting the challenge with my next update. I’ve taken a short break to clean up and post a single chapter story in the next few days, then I’ll be back with this one, (and if no one else gives any suggestions, it WILL be yours)

@shrinker82,

When you say there will be more of the vore narration, did you mean the vore or the narration? Because I’m honestly not a fan of vore, but it was the style of writing and narration that I liked. I see it on giantess videos too. I prefer a giantess say what they are going to rather than them actually doing it. Something sexy about a woman just teasing like that, each idea just messing with a tiny guy’s mind.

Author's Response: Oh, I meant narration in general, not just vore. Furthermore, I like having aware scenarios at the 1-6 inch heights: it allows a giantess to be sweet and playful, yet still tease at the same time. This is something I guarantee you WILL SEE in not only the next few chapters, but several of my other stories as well.

Hmm. Chris is growing....interesting. Now that's new and something I can look forward to.

If Chris is growing and you are only going to include a few chapters, what sizes will you write about? If you are still deciding, I like the 3 inch, 6 inch, toddler size(2ft?), and child 3-4 foot?.

I don't think I ever actually consider Chris's size before and I forgot how small he was. I think his size now is a little too small for my taste, but I'm glad you didn't mention it too often so I could imagine Chris at the size I would like to see him handled and that is 3 inches or the size of a finger.

At 6 inches, well he is a perfect human dildo so that's soemthing to think about.

At toddler size, I think it would be funny to see Shannon carry him around and also sit on his lap a lot. I don't know why, but it's soemthing that I have gotten into lately. A sexy woman just sitting on a guy's lap and her butt/thighs just cover his legs up completely. She can grind and gyrate her hips and use him as a cushion. She doesn't even have to be naked, I just like this position.

It could even be a nonsexual thing. Maybe Chris as a toddler would sneak into Rachel's house and find a cushioned single seat arm chair and he sits on it. His legs don't stick out or dangle, they are on the cushion. Then Rachel's mom casually walks in the room, turns on the tv, and sits comfortablely in the chair. She has a small top on and is wearing tight fit jeans that are just ready to burst from trying to contain her body. She has no idea she just sat on Chris. Now Chris isn't completely sat on, but he can't see his groin or legs as they have disappeared under Rachel's mom's butt. In front of Chris is her hair and her back. She hasn't leaned back so this gives Chris some space to look around. He can't move since his legs are pinned. She flips through the channels and finally finds her favorite movie. Then she scoots her ass back and Chris's hips are now under her. He can't even twist to move now. Then at last she leans back and presses Chris into the sofa, her hair shrouding him in darkness and the smell of her hair surrounds him. Chris hopes that she doesn't notice him so he refuses to ask for help. He tries to stay still despite the enormous pressure from her ass. He can feel his legs slowly getting numb and doesn't know how long he can handle this. During parts of the movie, you can tell she is getting excited because her butt begins moving in circles. Chris thinks it must be a romantic movie. He can feel a boner beginning to harden and he hopes that she cannot feel it or there might be trouble. Chris begins to think of random ideas to get rid of his erection, but it is no match compared to the physical dominance of the ass that he is now trapped under. Then all of a sudden, she gets up. Light enters Chris's eyes as he sees Rachel's mom leave his sight. Chris makes a silent prayer thanking whoever is listening for he is finally free. While he was trapped, he did slightly enjoy it. Chris reached for his dick and began to rub one out. Then Chris heard footsteps and they were approaching his way. He just had to get up and hide next to the chair, that's all he had to do. Chris tried to stand up, but his legs failed to move as they are still numb. Chris admits defeat and lies still on the arm chair again hoping she doesn't see him. He got his wish, she didn't see him, but instead another nightmare is about to continue. She stops right in front of him and her butt is facing him, almost teasing him. Except this time, she was naked. Chris's mouth dropped. She bends forward to grab the remote and Chris can see her ass stretch and expand before his eyes. She stands back up and then she begins to sit down again. Chris uses his arms to pull his body as far back in the chair as possible, but still this mom's long legs let her ass reach him. Her ass lands on his legs again, but this time his thighs and dick are free. He is stuck, but not limited. She resumes her movie and she is moving her hips along Chris's shins and ankles. With a great view that he has, Chris begins to finish his masturbation to this experience. Just moments before he was about to explode, her ass slides back to him and plops on his groin. Chris's dick is now bent to the side just aching for release. He can see it just trapped under her left ass cheek and he see the tip sticking out. Chris reaches for his dick, hoping to relieve the tension in his body, but almost on cue, Chris watched as her ass just rolls over the rest of his dick covering it completely. He tries to buck his hips, but as a toddler size, he can't create any motion without the help of Rachel's mom. The pressure was subsiding and Chris thought maybe he wasn't going to explode after all. He could feel his dick slowly begin to soften. Chris then hears moaning on the tv and got nervous. The ass in front of him began to move. His dick was getting hard again. Soon her ass was rubbing Chris very quickly and Chris thought he was he was going to blow his load right now. But then her ass raised up a little and Chris saw his dick aim straight up. "Oh no" Chris thought, and almost in slow motion, he watches as her ass descends right on his lap and his dick enters vagina. Chris immedialty began to panic, wondering if she felt his dick inside her, if he was going to explode inside her, or if it was possible that he could get her pregnant at a toddler size. He did not want to find out and hoped for the best by staying still and thinking of random stuff he hates such as history. While Chris's mind was in panic, his dick was in heaven, ready to explore the fine cave it was in. Chris could feel his dick was harder than ever, but being at a toddler size meant that his member probably wasn't too big for Rachel's mom to notice. Usually he would feel sad, but Chris was relieved. Now he just had to control his arousal which was hard to do when your dick is stuck inside your best friend's mom's vagina. Rachel's mom was enjoying her movie. She loved watching romance movies where a female lead had her way with a guy that she likes. It made her horny and today she felt extra wet, but she wasn't going to complain. It just made the movie that much better. She watches as the female protagonist pins a guy's head between her legs in a school girl pin and then she slides her butt on his face and begins smothering him, bouncing her ass on the guy's face. Rachel's mom wished that was her. Chris then saw the ass in front of him move up and down bringing Chris to the edge. Then she raised her butt a bit higher and Chris's member was free of her butt. Her ass came down and flattened his dick, causing Chris to explode with most of it landing on the side of the arm chair and on Chris himself. Barely any landed on Rachel's mom which he guess was lucky. Chris was exhausted, but Rachel's mom wasn't. She continued to grind on Chris despite his worn out penis feeling very sore. Chris winced as his sore dick was enduring another beat down, but he was surprised he was getting hard again. Then she stopped everything. Chris froze in place. Did she feel his dick this time? Chris felt a hand grab his numb foot and soon he was dragged out from under her and held upside down by his ankle. Chris was eye level to her knees and had to bend his neck to look at Rachel's mom. Boy was he scared. He is now at her mercy. He could see a look of digust on her face. "You're a perverted little guy, aren't you?" She claims. Chris said nothing out of complete shock. Rachel's mom glances at the tv and gives him a sinister smile. "Well, I got the perfect punishment for you". She turns Chris around while still upside down so he can see the tv. He watches as a man is licking between her legs and it looks like he is also tied up. Chris is turned back around to face Rachel's mom. She then wrapped one hand around both of Chris's ankles and raised him until his head was level with her hips. Then with her free hand, she placed it on the back of Chris's head and guided it toward her lower body. Chris turned his head in protest, but Rachel's mom was persistent and turned his face toward her pussy. She pressed his face into her vaginal lips and held him there between her legs. "Lick." She calmly instructed. Chris refused again, but knew he would suffocate if he refused a third time. "If you don't lick now, I will force you to lick and keep you down here all day. And I'm sure we don't want that now, do we?" She said in a sexy tone. Reluctantly, Chris began to lick and she began to moan. She would let Chris have a few seconds of air and then she would drive his head straight back into her crotch, almost wedging him inside. Chris's hands couldn't stop her but were pestering her enough so she took her hair band and tied Chris's wrists together making him helpless. She placed her hand back onto his head and held it there. Rachel's mom began to rock her hips side to side, closing her eyes and listened as the woman on tv moaned in synch with her. Rachel's mom relished the feeling of Chris against her and wanted him to please her all day. She then clamped her thighs around Chris's head and she released her hand from the back of his head. She then reached down and grabbed her tight bra from the floor without losing her grip of Chris and decides to put them on. She moved Chris's ankles inside her cleavage and with the bra on, Chris was dangling from her boobs. His ankles fit so snug between her boobs that she could let Chris hang from them. She released Chris from her enourmous thighs and Chris found himself slightly swinging. He looked up and noticed that his feet and ankles have disappeared in between Rachel's mom's breasts. She began to swing her hips forward gently and soon Chris was moving away from her body and then back toward her pussy. Every time he swung back to her, his face would collide with her vaginal lips and Rachel's mom seemed to be doing this on purpose. She then reached down and picked up a pair of panties with an elastic waistband on it. "This should be fun" she thought. With her hands free, she began to put the panties on, dragging them up her legs. Soon it reached Chris and he saw the panties stretch over the back of his head and his world began to darken. Rachel's mom lifted her panties over Chris's head and let the waistband rest along Chris's neck, forcing his head into her crotch. Chris heard the elastic snap agasint his neck and his face kissed by her pussy lips. He tried to move his head back, but the panties were too tight and held him snug against her. Marveling at her work, Rachel's mom watched as Chris began to struggle. His feet held by her bra and his head was inside her panties. And the best part was that her hands were free to continue her day. She sat back down on her cushioned arm chair and smiled when she heard Chris emit a muffled groan, vibrating her pussy. Rachel's mom closed her thighs around Chris's head and now placed both of her hands on her panties, gently pressing Chris tightly into her. Just then, she heard a door open and heard Rachel's voice. She couldn't let her daughter see her like this, so without getting up, she grabbed a blanket and covered her and Chris up, hoping this disguise would work. Rachel walked in with a disgusted look on her face. "Mom! How many times have you seen this movie? If you want to be pleased like that woman, then please go out and find a real man." Rachel's mom smiled back. "Oh, don't worry honey, I found someone." Rachel had no idea. "Well good" Rachel responded. "It shouldn't be that hard with that kind of body you have mom. By the way, have you seen Chris lately? I'm worried about him." Chris tried to scream but his voice was muffled. "Did you hear something mom?" Rachel's mom then crossed her legs silencing Chris. "I think it was just the tv dear and I'm sure Chris is ....safe at the moment. Why don't you go out today? The weathers nice." Rachel smiled. "You're right mom. I think I will. Ok, I will be back soon." And then Rachel left the house. Rachel's mom threw off the blanket and checked on Chris. She lifted the waistband of her panties and looked at Chris's face. It was covered in her vaginal secretions and she could smell it off him. It smelled lovely to her but for Chris, it was awful. With his breathing blocked by sticky fluids and his hands tied up, he stuck his tongue out and began licking around his mouth. Rachel's mom felt a small moment of pity for the boy, but once she saw him lick her juices she laughed. "Mhmm. So you enjoy this! At first I thought you hated this, but now I see your true perversions. I think we both could go for another round. What do you say?" She teased as she lowered Chris's head back inside her panties. "Wait!..." Chris shouted as his head vanished into her panties and his face agasint her crotch. "Mhmm. Well too late now. No need to resist, you are safe with me all day. I wonder how yoga pants would look on us right now..." She smiled. "Mmpfh!" Chris cried out much to her delight. Rachel's mom didn't need a man anymore. She had Chris, and he is all she needs to fulfill all her sexual desires. He can't fight back since he is too small. His only hope is to grow out of this mess. But until then, he was a pleasure pet for Rachel's mom.



Well, I took my idea way too far. But as you can see, if Chris grows a little bit, there are plenty of new ideas to do with him.

Anyway, I hope we can discuss more ideas while we wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Jeez bud! That’s not a suggestion; that’s a whole bloody chapter! If I don’t use it in the main story, this is something I’d love to post as one of my “alternate chapters”. I do want to explore several different sizes, and I do like the dildo and toddler ideas (trust me, I was thinking along the same lines), I just didn’t want to string it out too long, but a series of shorter chapters with some fun along the way is a good option. Thanks again.

Sorry to see the spoiler.  Was hoping for more aware footplay interaction at that size similar to chapters 13 and 14 before he grows.  Hopefully she will grow at the same rate until he is full size and Shannon is huge. Would let the fun continue. Look forward to the next chapter!

Love the story so far and looking forward to what happens next. Seems like Chris is mad at sharron wonder what it will take to win his trust back, maybe another twerk session?

Author's Response: Oh, things are going to get really interesting the next day, I guarantee it. In the meantime, thanks for reading and the review, and stay tuned for more.

Hmm. Realistic. But also balanced and playful.

Let's see. Noreen will probably have several major questions for both Shannon and Chris. She will ask Shannon about Chris's condition, what she does to Chris and how to take care of him. She could ask Chris about how Chris ended up under her foot and he can detail his journey.

I think Noreen could go full nurse mode and tend to Chris's health since Noreen is a big fan of being healthy.

Shannon will assure Noreen that everything is fine and want to take back Chris asap. But also want Noreen to keep the secret safe.

Chris, like you said will want to be kept in safe hands and might even think of sticking with Noreen since Noreen doesn't seem as aggressive as Shannon.

I can see Noreen being curious about the whole situation which includes the shrinking, size of Chris, who else knows and so on. Then they soon decide that she needs to help Shannon to keep Chris safe. Then after that, Noreen think of ways to deal with Chris, perhaps playful and try to make it fun.

But yes, I Think a realistic approach would be some form of shock, but also questioning both of them to know the scooop of what's going on. Then she will start to think of the "fun" aspects for Chris.

I don't see Noreen as a mean type, and yes I guess she could be playful. I would like a naughty vibe from her, but I doubt you would include that since Shannon acts the same way. Perhaps, Chris and Noreen needs to spend time together as friends and then they can find some fun things to do later.

I do like the thought of Noreen trying to find a guy so I do hope she gets somewhat sexual with Chris.

Lots of possibilities!

Author's Response: Most of what you’re saying is aligns with what I’m thinking, too. The problem is in the execution—finding the right balance. There’s a lot I have planned for the next couple of in story days and not a lot of extra time. Spoiler: Chris will start growing back soon. Thank you so much for your thoughts and feedback!

Author's Response: Most of what you’re saying is aligns with what I’m thinking, too. The problem is in the execution—finding the right balance. There’s a lot I have planned for the next couple of in story days and not a lot of extra time. Spoiler: Chris will start growing back soon. Thank you so much for your thoughts and feedback!