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Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2019 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 55

Can't wait for the showdown! Still hoping for a giantess Shannon, but might also be awesome if Shannon becomes a giantess for a while and terrorizes the town and Chris,  but then Rachel figures out how to grow even bigger and make giantess Shannon her foot toy to get her back for how she treated Chris. Would love if she gave her a taste of her own medicine and would be awesome to have two gisntesses. Overall though,  if it has to just be one, Shannon's character is made for a 500 plus foot giantess who plays with the city like the goddess she would love to be...



Author's Response: I DO think Shannon is perfect for a Giantess growth scenario, and I also like the idea for her to finally get her comeuppance. The real question is exactly how to do it. Anyway, thanks for all the reviews and suggestions.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 55

Wow, what a chapter! I like how you literally wrote a little about every character in the story.

Hmm, where to start? Well, I like Shannon’s threats to stuff Ray and Chris in her underwear or ass, but she mentioned panties so much, part of me just wanted it to happen to at least one of them. Ray seemed like the best person for it. I think Shannon should have reused her soiled panties just to torment him some more.

I like Rachel and Sue Ann parts since they are going to be the rescue team. Next chapter seems like the battle of the babysitters.

Mrs. Carson still enjoying that novel. I wish I was that purple dildo. Must have had some fun nights lately.

Good to see Noreen after so long. It was a long time since she had any moments with Chris.

Alright, how will the fight happen. I was hoping for a surprise, haha. Hmm. Looks like it will happen at the airport. Probably before Shannon gets on the flight. I’m thinking the fight should happen before security, but there could be a moment where Shannon explains to either Ray or Chris that she has to smuggle them inside her when they cross security.

We know Shannon’s car so Sue Ann could maybe track it down at the airport. Shannon will probably make some mistakes by stalling and day dreaming of playing with 2 tinies while Sue Ann is in hot pursuit. Sue Ann finds Shannon and yells at her, snapping Shannon out of her dream. Chris struggles furiously once he hears Sue Ann’s voice. Ray has no idea what’s going on, but believes that anyone is better than Shannon at this point. Sue Ann runs at Shannon and Shannon tries to run but is slower and also is carrying luggage. Sue Ann tackles Shannon and they begin wrestling. A crowd begins to mobilize and watch the women fight. Punches and kicks are thrown, hair pulling is involved. Soon, airport security shows up and separates the women.

They are taken to a spare room and are questioned in front of 2 male officers. Shannon smiles knowing she can probably woo these men over unlike Sue who isn’t so easily swayed by her charms. Sue Ann gives her speech accusing Shannon of theft and Shannon laughs knowing Sue Ann can’t give away the state of Chris. The officers state that both women are to be taken to a police station for further questioning which makes Shannon’s laughter stop. Now Shannon argues her point in frustration and Sue Ann is finally calm thinking of a new plan. Once Shannon realized that these cops couldn’t easily fall for her tricks, she reaches for her necklace which has an odd color inside the gem piece. She begins twisting it and Sue relealizes what’s about to happen so she ducks. Shannon then takes the necklace gem and sprays the room with the shrinking potion, some of it landing on the officer’s faces but missed Sue Ann. The officers begin to shrink leaving Sue Ann speechless as it’s the first time she has seen someone shrink so fast.

Shannon then turns to Sue Ann. “Now it’s just you and me, bitch”. Shannon smiles as she charges at Sue Ann. They begin wrestling once again, Sue Ann carefully trying not to roll on the tiny officers who begin crawling toward the edge of the room. Shannon pins Sue Ann and uses her weight to hold Sue Ann down. “Chris is mine!” Shannon screeched. “And you will never take him from me! You want to know where he is going next?” Sue Ann watched as Shannon reached for one of the tiny officers trying to escape and dragged him by the ankle towards the giantess duo. Shannon then brought the tiny man toward Sue Ann’s waist and brought him lower towards the young woman’s underwear. The man screamed in despair, hoping this was not his end. His screams became muffled as Shannon released Sue Ann’s waistband as the little man struggled against her. Sue Ann instinctively moaned in pleasure and Shannon continued. “Maybe you can understand me, girl to girl. We have needs, and Chris is perfect for me. Accept this man as a gift from me and you can understand why I want Chris inside me so bad! I can feel him wiggling inside me!” Shannon began closing her eyes and imagining Chris’s face.

This got Sue Ann back to reality. She reached for the 2nd officer near her and grabbed him in desperation since there was nothing else to grab. The officer could do nothing as Sue Ann brought her hand toward Shannon’s face. Sue Ann then shoved the poor man into Shannon’s moaning mouth and she began choking on him. Shannon rolled off Sue Ann trying to spit out the man and Sue Ann then climbed on Shannon pressing her hands on Shannon’s face preventing her from breathing. The little man clawed at Shannon’s throat, and made his way toward the opening of Shannon’s mouth trying to escape, but Sue Ann then stuck her fingers into Shannon’s mouth and pushed the little man, forcing him into Shannon’s throat. She felt bad for the young man, but she had no choice. Sue Ann put both hands on Shannon’s nose and mouth and she watched as Shannon’s struggles became slower and slower until her body went limp.

Sue Ann climbed off, and wiped her forehead with relief. She reached for Shannon’s panties and ripped them off, casting it the side while she reached into Shannon’s pussy to feel for Chris. Meanwhile, Ray was trapped in Shannon’s panties but now finds himself free as he looks around the room. He looked around and saw Sue Ann fingering Shannon. “Not another one!” He complained, tired of these crazy women. Ray ran to the door hoping for an escape.

Sue Ann felt Chris and pulled him out slowly. Chris seemed to be knocked out but still breathing and Sue Ann kissed him repeatedly. Sue Ann felt some movement in her own panties and remembered the tiny officer that Shannon used to try and seduce her. She was about to fetch him out when she heard loud footsteps. Soon a door burst open and there was Rachel rushing over to Sue Ann and hugging her after seeing Shannon’s body laying motionless. She saw Chris in Sue Ann’s hand and the 3 of them formed a nice group hug. Sue Ann asked how did Rachel get there and in the doorway walked in Mrs. Carson standing there smiling at the group. She smiled at her daughter as Rachel went in for another hug. Mrs. Carson then saw something move near her shoe and picked it up. It began squirming, but Janet held a firm grip. Mrs. Carson couldn’t believe her eyes. In her hand, was a tiny man trying to wiggle out of her hand. Maybe the stories of what Rachel told her were true! She was too stunned in the moment that she got surprised when Rachel asked for her. “So mom, do you believe me now?” Mrs. Carson smiled, quickly moving the tiny Ray behind her back. “Of course I do, sweetie.”

Mrs. Carson then walked out of the room, out of sight of the other ladies. She brought up Ray back to her face and he began begging for her help. Mrs. Carson ignored his pleas and then noticed a resemblance of Ray to the man in her romantic novel which sparked an idea in her head. “Oh, I think we can definitely help each other young man. I have been looking for someone that can....entertain me, and in return, I can help you out.” Ray had learned enough from Shannon. “If you mean sexually, then I’m not going to agree to become your toy, you cunt.” Ray responded in frustration trying even harder to squirm from her hand. Janet smirked at Ray’s insults. “Mmhmm, I think you will do nicely. I have been getting aroused very often these days and I have been looking for a fun way to orgasm. How would you like to by my panty pet?” Mrs. Carson winked as she lowered him down to her jeans. “Wait, no! Not you too! Why is every woman I meet so horny!” he shouted as Mrs. Carson pulled her jeans and panties away from her waist revealing Ray’s new home for the time being. Janet released her grip and watched as Ray slid down into her panties and nestled between her vaginal lips. She let her panties snap back against Ray, leaving him in his new prison. “I think I found a new partner to have a bedtime story with” Janet chuckled to herself imagining the possibilities. Janet patted her crotch and felt the little man slip between her pussy lips. A slight moan leaked out leaving Mrs. Carson blushing with embarrassment. Mrs. Carson looked down and after checking that there was no noticeable bump in her pants, she went back to join her daughter and Sue Ann.

As Mrs. Carson reached the room again, she saw Sue Ann and Rachel talking together. “Make sure you take care of him Rachel” Sue Ann said. “But what about you? I thought you wanted to take care of Chris? That way, you won’t feel lonely.” Sue Ann felt another tickle in her panties and smiled. “Don’t worry, I won’t be alone.” Sue Ann walked Rachel out of the room with a tiny in her panties while Rachel had Chris in her hands. Mrs. Carson had no temptation to hold Chris. After all, she has her own little man too.

All 3 ladies walked out of the airport with their own tiny passengers to keep them happy.

The End.

Of course, I had to involve some fan fiction.

Anyway, I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: In this chapter, I really wanted to give an update on where all the characters were up to this point. I pictured it like a movie montage where you see each character struggling with their own situations.

Trust me, the fight scene WILL be a surprise, I just wanted to get some suggestions and include those that I like. Hopefully, you’ll enjoy the final product.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2019 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 55

And the final showdown of the best giantess harem of the site draws near! XDDD

Shannon is, as I said, a very complex villain and I really like her character. Yes, she does bad things and doesn’t hesitate to hurt others if it means having her way. BUT, isn’t that also true for other characters like Mrs. Carlson? (I am thinking about that extra chapter she finds Chris… and it just occurred to me, she would end up competing with her daughter for Chris wouldn’t she?? KKKKKKKKK This story gets my gears running with every chapter), but when it comes to Chris, she is like the other girls and don’t want to put him in harms ways.

'Harms ways', I might be way off, but I think that is the key for the end. So far lucky has been on little Chris side and he avoided any serious injure, but, as we draw near the climax of the story, something unexpected is bound to happen, an accident, and even Shannon can’t predict the consequences. With everyone together in this kind of mayhem, the chances of danger for Chris rise 120% (It’s pure math and numbers don’t lie. Believe me kk).  

And sweet Sue Ann… I imagine she and Rachel are pretty upset right now, and if something were to happen to Chris, they would be really, really pissed off. Rachel I think is too young for what I am imagining, she would be devastated by the situation, but lost. Sue Ann is more mature and that’s the point I want to make: she is sweet and gentle, but I would love to see her lose composure and be angry, hating Shannon for everything she did. Maybe even Sue Ann might be surprised with how much she carried for our beloved protagonist… ;) 

Things might go two ways:

Sue Ann gets to Chris house and the fight begins. Shannon tries to splash Sue Ann with the shrinking formula, but Sue Ann already expected that. She is younger and stronger so she holds Shannon hand and splash her with the formula, not knowing Chris and Ray are also trapped within the woman body and gets shrunk even more.

The two manage to scape their prison, trying to avoid getting the attention of the now 1 inch tall (but still gigantic in there perspective) Shannon. As for Sue Ann, she is now far to huge for Chris to even distinguish her face traits; She steeps on him, but even so he is luck for he realizes he is right in the gap of her big toe. Ray is not so luck and when Mrs. Carlson come to see what is all that fuss, hears a plop noise. “Ugh, did I just step on a bug?” she asks rising her feet, revealing a pint-size red stain on her sole.

That’s exactly when Rachel enters the scene after making sure Chris wasn’t in Sue Ann apartment and snaps. She (and Sue Ann) think that Chris got crushed and is beyond herself. Mrs. Carlson tries to understand what is happening and asks Rachel how Shannon is so little, but she just scream for her mother to “SHUT THE FUCK UP YOU MURDER!!”, as she strides towards Shannon to start torturing the main responsible for killing her best friend. Meanwhile, Chris tries to get Sue Ann attention and cause even a tickle at her feet, but he is far too small, maybe forever now. Moreover, Sue Ann is in shock, crying like a child, blaming herself for everything.

You can switch roles and Chris will have to escalate Rachel sandals and get more intimate than he ever did with his best friend and now girlfriend foot. Oh God, I can’t wait to see what it really will be like!

If they grow, I would love to see a fight between a GodSue Ann versus ‘Shannonzilla’ while a most confused Mrs. Carlson tries to not destroy everything in the search of her daughter or she might think its all part of a wet dream and finally fulfill some of her fantasies with Chris (who Sue Ann still believes she crushed to death) all in front of Rachel.

Rachel, desperate to save Chris from her own mother, enters the house and finds Ray, who makes a full perfect growth formula for her. Ray gets back to normal, but Rachel drinks the rest of the formula. Ray screams for her not to, but she isn’t going to listen and is too late anyway. She grows but gets much more big than the other 3, who seem mere action figures from her perspective.

Rachel puts an end to the fight but is very aroused by the experience. She is, after all, an adolescent who now doesn’t have to answer to anyone. She squeeze her mother, demanding to have Chris who is promptly given to her. She has a power trip thinking about the videos and what she saw her mother doing and wants to play with Chris forever. Out of character? Maybe. Maybe its a side effect of ingesting so much growth formula. She just stops when Chris stops moving and seems to not be breathing. Ray saves the boy with his Deus Ex Machina formula and brings everyone back to normal.

What about the destruction of the city and the deaths? Well, a 300ft giantess is too surreal to believe, so people just assume all was caused by an unknown mass hysteria or the govern covers everything up, taking Ray, Shannon into custody. After some time, life gets back on tracks. Rachel and Sue Ann still blame themselves for everything, but a now forever shrunk Chris comforts both and assures the guilty falls entirely with Shannon.

I know I am the one who suggested the growth possibility. It’s just that, after giving more thought, I guess things would just get messy, and this has always been a story about shrinking. Just to be clear: I will definitely love either of the two ways! Hope some of my ideas come in handy when writing the final showdown.

Don’t care about Norem enough to think about anything for her. Sorry.

Now, for some questions: You think you will be able finish the story before new year? After finishing this one, you already have plans for other stories? Maybe in the same universe? You write other stories together with this one?Sorry for the many questions. I am just curious.

If you ever want to discuss about some story you are writing for the site and needs help, just send me a message (I never sent one, don’t even know if the site has the feature for private messages, but if it has, you can send me anytime kkk). My writing is nowhere near the quality of yours, but sometimes only talking helps to get new ideas.

Thank you, not only for the story, but also for being such a nice guy when answering all the reviews. Five stars for you! A lot of people obviously love your characters, me included, so you are a big inspiration :D Let’s go for the final ride!!



Author's Response: Well, you certainly have some interesting ideas. I had given some thought about other characters shrinking, and Chris shrinking into the micro-verse....and someone getting squished.

To answer your other questions: I am really hoping I can finish this story, and the last alternate chapter, before the year is out, and yes, I do have plans for many other stories that I’d like to start working on: some long, some short.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2019 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 55

Blergh, Shannon is becoming so mean. I really hope she ends up under Sue an's ass somehow. Then I'd be happy.



Author's Response: Well, I’ll consider your suggestion. Thanks for the input.

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