Date: December 25 2019 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 59
I thought it was a great chapter but honestly am thinking what a lot of other people seem to think. It’s bitter sweet to see it come to an end, even if it is a good one. I was looking forward to seeing the interactions between Chris and Rachel while he was much smaller, especially since later in the series she seemed very excited about it. But what do I know, you always seem to throw curve balls through the series. Either way, great story and I’m glad I caught up in time to see it come to an end. Can’t wait for the epilogue.
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[Report This]Date: December 23 2019 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 59
Wrapped up my two reviews into one. Sorry for the mess :( I need to organize my thoughts better before writing.
I am conflicted. On one side, I am really happy to see Chris, Rachel And Sue Ann adventure conclusion with a happy ending. On the other side, I am sad because it ended. Your writing was amazing, beginning to end. Even when I thought you had made mistake, like when you had Chris found by Sue Ann first instead of Rachel, you turned the tables on me and made me like character I wasn't all that invested at first. You seemed worried about the micro part since it was your first time, but your descriptions once again were the best.
So, now that we have reached the end, I must thank you once again for all the efforts I know you must have put into creating these characters and their story. I have nothing to add. If you wait eagerly for the epilogue and Hope for a spinoff or a continuation. Who knows? Maybe in a spinoff we will get to see a showdown between a Rachel and Sue-zilla vs Kaijuu Shannon.
Even better: a soinnoff where Sue Ann also fell in love with Chris after he saves her from Shannon. Shannon shrinks and remains in Sue Ann care. When Sue Ann is alone, Shannon thinks that Ray might have keept some formula on his house. She convinces Sue Ann to bring her back to normal and she actually get back to normal. What she doesn't expect is for Sue Ann to spill most of the formula on herself too.
Sue Ann grows and grows a mile high, not only in size but in her craving for Chris too. She will not stand for Rachel keeping her little hero all to herself! Chris is her hero! Her knight in shining armor. And we have a showdown Rachel vs. maddly in love Sue Ann.
You could also make a series of spinnoffs with each girl growing...
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. That 2020 may bring inspiration for the both of us and everyone else who wants to write their own stories.
PS. Seems I am unable to write a review for this story without also writing a fanfic at the same time kkkkkkkkkk
Author's Response: Just a guess, but I think you’re going to enjoy the epilogue and alternate chapter. I had thought about Rachel finding Chris, which is what I explored in her alternate chapter (which I thought turned out well), but I really wanted Sue Ann to show up in the second half of the story, and I figured it made a little more sense.
As for the alternate chapter, I’m certainly considering having more than one giantess fighting each other, but I’m still up in the air. I’ve still got some time to consider all my options, so I think carefully.
Thank you for all your reviews and suggestions. I’m glad you enjoyed the story!
[Report This]Date: December 23 2019 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 59
Finaly got caught up with this story. I loved the descriptions of the unaware parts with Rachel in this chapter. Keep it up! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I’m glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: December 23 2019 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 59
This was a great chapter. Loved the description of micro Chris and what he went through. Maybe for. Spin off idea Rachel lies about not finding Shannon then when no one is around uses what’s left of the shrinking formula to make her micro like Chris and the crush her with her butt. Overall really good and can’t wait to see some spin offs :D
Author's Response: I’m glad you liked it. At first, I wasn’t planning on doing much detail about the micro world, but I knew that you and several other readers have been asking for a Micro Chris interaction, so I figured I needed to add at least some. I don’t currently have any plans for a spin-off, but the epilogue May leave the door open in the future should I desire it. Thanks for reading, and for ALL your reviews!
[Report This]Date: December 23 2019 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 59
I think it's a nice conclusion to this story.
Thank you for the ride you took us on. It was a blast, with many unexpected turns.
The only thing is that I think these characters are so well set up, that I hope we will see them again sometime, in another story or some extra epilogue perhaps?
Thanks for writing and until next time!
Author's Response: Well, as I said in the story summery, I may have written a story with these characters, but I didn’t create them. When I found the story on Writing.com, I thought I could develop the intended story a little better, but obviously I couldn’t do it there, so I decided to post it here and it just sorta took off. I’d like to develop my own characters; it’s something my readers have said I need to work on.
[Report This]Date: December 23 2019 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 59
Definitely a good way to conclude this story. I look forward to the epilogue next and see where everyone is at with their lives.
I do want to talk about my thoughts on Shannon as a character but I'll wait until the epilogue is up.
Author's Response: So, about the epilogue: it was always meant to be the true end to the story, but not EVERY character will be in it. Thanks for reading!
Date: December 23 2019 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 59
Great chapter, and can't wait for the epilogue! Also, per your request, a few ideas for the long alternate ending chapter. It might make sense to pick it up when Sue Ann and Rachel have a growing Chris. With Shannon tracking Chris to Sue Ann's and his parents returning soon, her only escape from authorities is to flee or grow herself. Chris grows back to normal with Sue Ann and Rachel over the next day. They call the police who come to Sue Ann's to take the report when they feel what seems to be minor, rhythmic earthquakes. You can guess the confrontation and surprise when they see Shannon's gigantic feet outside the window... I think it would be awesome if she started as a small giantess of 100 ft and grew bigger to the point where she's unstoppable. Maybe from 100 to 500 to 1000 feet...to a mile? That way she could make the whole city her foot toy. I'd live to see Rachel, Sue Ann, and Chris trying to escape the city on a cruise ship along with thousands of others when Shannon swims to the ship at 1000 or 5000 ft tall and makes it like a bath toy. Lots of bare feet footplay would be amazing and I could totally see someone with Shannon's personality playing with whole buildings between her toes or making 1/4 inch tall people (from her perspective) climb her wrinkled soles. Really looking forward to it!
Author's Response: I was also thinking of picking things up in the alternate chapter around the same time as well. I’m thinking of moving through several giantess phases, from about 7-15ft, then slowly getting larger after that. I’m still working on the chain of events, so I appreciate the help.
Thank you for reading and for ALL your reviews!