Date: May 22 2018 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Pushing her to the Brink
Whoa... this build up though. Had to clean my screen after reading this chapter! Lol jk
Another amazing chapter but now It left me with some questions. Based on how she was reacting in this chapter, does she know that she can grow? I just get the feeling that in this chapter, she was trying to maintain focus but with Jeff slowly taking that away, that she could start to grow? I could be wrong though! Can't wait to read what happens next!!
I feel like you're touching upon the magic of GTS storytellling. I won't give anything away, but I'll say that I personally prefer stories in which the growth or shrinking mechanics have some rules that are unique to that story. They have to make sense through the whole progression of the story, or I lose my immersion.
I'll also say that I dropped a lot of red herrings into this tale already to keep the readers guessing. Hoping that you're enjoying the mystery so far!