Reviewer: kbDArt Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2023 10:57 PM Title: Introduction

I agree with Gershwin's review, but I'm gonna be a little kinder in the review, as I really like the idea of Sorority shrinkies and I thought you did really well with the Susan-Quinn (really like her teasing dialogue towards him and how she worked herself up to eating him) and Jenny-Jacob. I thought the crush deaths with Cindy and in the Quarry were done a little too flippantly as well as a couple of the vore deaths. That said, I would encourage you to keep writing - you'll only get better the more you write.

Here's what I would recommend if I were doing the story:

1. Use a little more backstory and dialogue for the couples that knew eachother and as they walked up to the Sorority House.
3. Used some more games for the shrinkies (truth-dare, zipling), perhaps a little femdom stuff (shrinky ball-gags, where the shrinky tries to keep out of the mouth - this could have been a game amongst the women), perhaps even a game of shrinky pinball to get the crush element in.

Reviewer: NRawkGTS Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19 2018 7:12 AM Title: Drinks with a small twist

I feel so conflicted with this story, like the setting is great and all but are all these girls phychopaths?  I could see one or two of them taking advantage of the situation and casually killing the tiny men, but even girls who don't seem like they'd normally hurt a fly are cruelly killing these guys and basically laughing like it's the only thing to do with them.

I'm also comfused with the how this whole shrinking the boys to stay safe things is supposed to work.  Isn't this mass murder?  At the very least all of these students disappearing in a single night is going to raise questions and honestly I don't think the girls are the ones that need protection.  When men 'had power over them' they got a sexually assaulted (and sure that's horrible) but give them power over men and they callously kill them for entertainment?  Even if every guy there was a sexual offender (which we know they aren't) these girls are monsters!

And yet I've still read every chapter and added this story to my favorites... though half of that is to see if these girls will face any repercussions or regret their actions afterwards.

So... keep it up?  I'm still so confused right now.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2018 7:56 AM Title: The Quarry

I love all the cruel vore scenes. Particularly the background about the old lab partner not pulling weight

Reviewer: TinyLuke Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2018 9:51 AM Title: Cindy and the 6

I was kinda hoping that the squishing wouldn't result in death, but your world, your rules.