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Reviewer: kyary Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2018 4:12 PM Title: Dream State

I'm sure you're just taking a much deserved break from writing, but when you do return I hope you finish this story off! I really enjoy all your writing and want to see how this one ends.



Author's Response:

This one is definitely going to get finished when I get back into the swing of things, don't worry.  I just needed a little breather, and I'll get back to my longer stories once I've reviewed my notes.

Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2018 7:08 AM Title: Dream State

Love the story,but the one thing I don't get,is her growing to 10 feet. It kinda takes me out of the story because she would not be able to live a normal life . Or normal within a context,haha. 

Love your work tho. 



Author's Response:

Hey, can't please everyone. :P That actually will come up when she goes out among other people again, for now though how she'll fit in with the rest of society is the last thing on her mind.  She has a tiny man to play with, after all.

 

Glad you're enjoying my work!  

Reviewer: xoNAVxo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2018 9:45 PM Title: Dream State

Had to make an account just to comment how much I love the way you're tackling this gentle, relationship aspect of the giantess universe!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate it!  Please keep reading and writing reviews, attention and feedback are my lifeblood.

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2018 8:37 AM Title: Dream State

Really enjoyed this latest chapter and the revelations behind the trigger for size change. How far from being complete is this story? I would have thought that the guy would be trying to get his size back at this point.

Author's Response:

Right now the planned end point of this story is ???.  It's a toss-up between end of this day and after a day of school, depending on how I feel when I get to the former and whether I can keep it going without getting repetitive.  However, he is not going to get his size back, nor even try to, since this is what he wants.

Reviewer: Rise8 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 09 2018 11:05 PM Title: Dream State

Love the story and characters so far can’t wait to see what happens next. Will we get to see any more interaction with her butt? Maybe when he gets small enough he realizes he’s as small as her thong string?

Author's Response:

There will definitely be butt interactions in the future.  I love writing butt stuff, but like for it to be huge in comparison.  

Reviewer: Bobbylaws Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2018 8:45 AM Title: Dream State

I really like that Sarah is starting to own the giantess role picturing herself huge rather than just him being tiny. Hopefully she will actually grow that big one day? I think the neighborhood would enjoy it.



Author's Response:

You could say she's starting to grow into her role, in fact ;) I don't report the numbers every chapter but she has been growing, and it's getting faster now.

Reviewer: Bobbylaws Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2018 6:50 AM Title: Dream State

This continues to be a terrific story! I know you are a fan of socks, but is it at all possible to mix that interaction with bare feet at all? Thanks, and I look forward to reading more!



Author's Response:

Would in-sock suffice?  Because that's certainly going to happen.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2018 2:17 AM Title: Dream State

Finally our protagonist is getting somewhere with the shrinking. Sarah seems like a true giantess now. Now she only needs to grow to like 100 ft and take over that neighbourhood.

Thanks for writing the the many updates! 



Author's Response:

Pretty soon he'll be able to fit completely under her foot, then the good times can roll.  Not so sure about Sarah growing quite that big, but she'll definitely keep going.

 

Thanks for reading them and reviewing when you can!

Reviewer: madeofwin Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2018 9:59 PM Title: Dream State

I'm glad to see more of this.  It feels like her growth is falling to the wayside a litle.  



Author's Response:

Admittedly it is, but out of necessity rather than negligence.  Since it's from his POV and he knows he's shrinking, all of her growth just seems like he's shrinking more.  Plus, beyond a certain point it doesn't make that big of a difference whether someone is 6' or 7', they're still gigantic to your eyes.  However, I'm glad you're reading, and hope you keep doing so.

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2018 5:36 PM Title: Dream State

Just wanted to say that it has been awesome how prolific you have been the past few weeks. I've enjoyed the majority of the chapters that you have released for everything. This story is really good from the little bit that I have read.

Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see what else you come up with.

Author's Response:

Thanks for being such a frequent reader!  It gets a bit difficult to keep things fresh writing so often, so if you see something you like please let me know so I can do more of it.

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2018 5:36 PM Title: Dream State

Just wanted to say that it has been awesome how prolific you have been the past few weeks. I've enjoyed the majority of the chapters that you have released for everything. This story is really good from the little bit that I have read.

Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see what else you come up with.

Reviewer: kyary Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2018 1:23 PM Title: Dream State

Hard to express just how good the newest chapter is. Really love the different characters and the escalating tension. You really have me wondering how the story will end. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

After the upcoming dream chapter it'll just be him and Sarah for a while, but all the others are going to come back if he goes to school again.  Keep reading and reviewing please!

Reviewer: Chinaislitfam Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2018 7:06 PM Title: Dream State

I hope his voice doesn’t get too high pitched / quiet so Sarah can’t even hear him. That approach has been taken a lot and it annoys (me personally). Keep doing it however you want to though! Really like how Sarah protects him even though she teases him.

Author's Response:

A lot of the appeal and fun of writing this comes from their interactions, so it'd be pretty lame if he couldn't even talk, wouldn't it?  Nah, it'll just be another thing for her to tease him about.

Reviewer: Chinaislitfam Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2018 10:37 PM Title: Dream State

Please make a scene where he gets captured by other girls in school! (If you want to) I want to see what the other girls would do to him if they got ahold of him.

Author's Response:

There's actually going to be a hint of that in the next chapter, but it's going to be quite a while before Sarah takes him to school with her.  When she does though he'll be the center of attention, whether he wants to be or not.

Reviewer: Chinaislitfam Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2018 10:37 PM Title: Dream State

Please make a scene where he gets captured by other girls in school! (If you want to) I want to see what the other girls would do to him if they got ahold of him.

Reviewer: LilBinary Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2018 9:58 AM Title: Dream State

Just found this story. Love it! The teasing interaction between the characters is awesome! I also like how they are eagerly looking forward to it, instead of the cliche "oh no... i've dreamed about this but now that it's happening i hate it".

Cannot wait to see more!



Author's Response:

If you like how they're looking forward to it, wait until he gets small enough for them to have some real fun :) I don't have to tell you to keep reading, but please keep reviewing too!  I love hearing what people like about my stories.

Reviewer: Bobbylaws Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2018 4:05 AM Title: Dream State

I enjoy stories where there is a protector role which Sarah is falling into. It makes the story more dynamic and highlights the vulnerability of the tiny very well. Looking forward to him getting much smaller (and maybe her getting bigger)!



Author's Response:

Sarah wants to make it clear: the only person who gets to tease her boyfriend about stepping on him is her.  He's slowly but surely getting smaller, and she's getting a little bigger, so keep reading and letting me know what you think!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2018 2:21 PM Title: Dream State

You are adding chapters faster than I can review them, props for that!

Its nice to see Sarah finally growing to a more normal size in her dream, although it was a bit short.

I really liked the description of Sarah barely fitting her clothes and the "talk" therafter, well done!

Thank you for writing these chapters, see you next time!



Author's Response:

You can write a review for each chapter, I don't mind :P Thanks for the encouragement, and please keep reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2018 1:17 AM Title: Dream State

I am greatly enjoying the characters dynamic, and I'm looking forward to it eventually getting really small lol. Don't normally like slow shrink stories but I'm quite liking this



Author's Response:

I don't normally write slow shrink stories so this is unusual for us both.  Glad you like it!

Reviewer: coolkidmcawesome Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2018 9:04 PM Title: Dream State

Man you are setting up this dynamic so well. I cannot wait until he gets smaller and she can own up to some of these threats.

Excellent work dude ^^ keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  They're definitely going to have some fun when he gets as small as she always joked about.

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