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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2018 1:03 PM Title: Big Revelation

Ah, finally Sarah is rediscovering her growth. Good. Now those other bullies will have a harder time stealing our little protagonist from Sarah's clutches.

 

I don't really have anything to say, other than that I'm reading this story.

Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Don't think they won't try, though, they're tenacious and greedy!  And thanks for reading.

Reviewer: GentleFan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2018 2:06 AM Title: Big Revelation

Another great chapter. Love the interactions between them now that they both know how they can prompt their size changes. Hope the story stays gentle even as he gets really small. Exploring her body like a landscape would be fun :)



Author's Response:

I'm having a great time walking the line between "gentle and playful" and cruel and playful" and erring on the side of the former.  Keep reading and reviewing to get more of what you want!

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