[Report This]Date: November 17 2022 8:58 AM Title: Hopes and Dreams
Awwwwwwwwwwww this was a really cute chapter!
[Report This]Date: August 16 2018 3:33 PM Title: Hopes and Dreams
Don't listen to this guy beneath me, Sarah should really grow to that 100 ft. Sarah and her little protagonist's size are coupled anyway, so maybe he can just grow a bit. And they can still lead a normal life when Sarah is huge because ehhh they discover that they are filthy rich and can just build a huuuuge house ;)
But cute to see that they both wanted a comperatively gigantic Sarah from a very young age. Finally a dream come true for both of them!
Also nice to see some feet action in the next chapter.
Thank you for writing!
Author's Response:
But if he grew with her he wouldn't be tiny anymore, and that would be a huge disappointment after he shrank for her. More seriously though, I find shrunken much more enjoyable and challenging to write. If she were gigantic the focus would invariably be on her and the rest of society rather than her and the protagonist and how they interact. Plus they can have more fun without her worrying about stomping on a house while chasing him around. Sarah just wants to be a giantess, not a mass murderer. I have other characters for that :)
Not only is it cute, but it establishes something for me to fall back on for dreams, or in case I run out of ideas. This story seems to generate its own ideas though - thanks in part to my amazing readers! - and stuff like the cereal scene write themselves, so I may not need to. Maybe something to keep in mind for when I finally end this if people aren't sick to death of it and want bonus chapters.
Thank you so much for reading and all of your reviews!
Date: August 16 2018 5:33 AM Title: Hopes and Dreams
Excited for the next chapter. Even though the relationship would deteriorate if she grew to an actual giantess ax discussed, there are still ways to capture the magic, from building a toy city for him or even giving him a toy boat for a joint bath where he can captain the ship through the 'sea' of her bathtub. Just suggestions. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
The first sounds like too much trouble for Sarah, and she wouldn't fit in a bathtub anymore. I'll try to come up with something, though. And thanks, please keep reading and giving me feedback!
[Report This]Date: August 16 2018 2:57 AM Title: Hopes and Dreams
Love how adorable their dynamic is and Sarah has just enough swagger and sass to keep it from becoming cloying. I'm a little surprised given that the first few chapters invited some alternatives, but it's enjoyable nonetheless. Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks! I like to think that I keep it interesting by making her kind of a jokester, the last thing I want is for her to treat him like a porcelain doll that she's scared of breaking. I do wonder what you mean by alternatives, though.