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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2018 3:15 PM Title: Some Fancy Footwork

Sarah has indeed very fancy footwork. Thanks for writing such a scene where the tiny doesn't end up dead in the first few seconds.

Also, nice to see a chapter in this story again and thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

She's had years to practice stepping on the protagonist, she's gotten quite good at it.

 

Thanks for reviewing!  This story won't be updating daily ever again, but I'll shoot for weekly.

Reviewer: raskallion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2018 11:11 AM Title: Some Fancy Footwork

I looove this story! It looks like the growth is done, but it doesn't have to be! His minimum height could be in regard to hers; the bigger she gets, so does he, staying at what is to her, 1 inch, but to others increases as she does.



Author's Response:

I get what you're saying, but then he wouldn't be tiny, and I'm going to keep the focus on the relationship between them, his vulnerability and her power, rather than her stomping buildings.  Hopefully this doesn't discourage you from reading more, but if she were to become gigantic while he returned to normal size it would seriously undermine the overall story.

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2018 6:27 PM Title: Some Fancy Footwork

So glad this story is back man, I’ve missed it. I’m not a huge foot guy (I still enjoy it, just not as much as other stuff like insertion), but I’m very excited for next chapter, with some good ol body exploration.

Author's Response:

It wasn't dead, just resting.  I needed a break since after writing it for 3 weeks straight it was getting repetitive.  Hopefully you like the next chapter!

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