[Report This]Date: December 26 2018 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
Keep it up great story and great interactions beteewn Melina and Lucas!!!
[Report This]Date: December 13 2018 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
OMG! Amazing, keep it up. Now that Melina has 'taken care of' Lucas's issues, it maybe time for him to do some more cave diving for her...
Love the Gentle, playful yet dominate and mischivous Melina, she is well paired with the brave, daring and rougish Lucas. Awesome story!
[Report This]Date: December 11 2018 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
Oh Lucas look out my brave lad, Melina has a 'taste' for you (in both ways!)
[Report This]Date: December 07 2018 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
You are batting a 1000! Lucas and Melina are awesome together, though Lucas now has to be careful, he may of been 'too' sucessful in pleasing his gentle giantess... Hopefully Melina will adjust quickly and not bruise/turn to paste Lucas by accident...
Thank you for a wonderful story so far!
[Report This]Date: December 05 2018 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
Melina has tasted the 'forbiden fruit' and found it VERY MUCH TO HER LIKING! Hope Lucas can keep it up cause though Melina is a gentle giantess she may of been given a 'gift' by him that she can't help but to use.
she wouldn't deliberately hurt him, but he has just pressed her pleasure center hard! She's going to crave it now, he may of 'simulated' a bit too well. Though Melina is a good soul and Lucas will do what he can, he just has to be careful around the hungry V he has awakened...
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: November 19 2018 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
Great Story, good well thought out characters and reactions, Please continue, also noticed you have done Mark and Zava any chance of that story continuing as well (please say yes). Thank you!
Author's Response:
Hello and thank you for reading and taking the time to review. Indeed Mark and Zava will continue, and I have another chapter half written. Keep checking for updates!
Date: August 27 2018 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
From the first chapter this has been an amazingly descriptive story, I could actually feel like I saw what he was seeing. That level of immersion translating in this last chapter is quite.... incredible! Keep up the great work! Looking forward to ch 10 for sure now!
[Report This]Date: August 10 2018 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
Very god story! I'm a little bit sad everytime I'm at the end of a chapter, because I know I can't read more of the story!
Its very well written and its nice to see the thoughts of both protagonists. Both are so cute.
You're really taking us on an adventure!
Thanks for writing, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: August 06 2018 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
This has been a gread read so far. It was pretty good reading about both character's point of view of the situation and what each one thought about their own bodies and the other's.
I hope to see more of this story. It has been great!
Date: August 04 2018 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
As I mentioned before, I'm looking forward to your writing, and will be watching for each entry you make.
Tigernach
[Report This]Date: August 04 2018 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
You have a very interesting start to your story, and I am happy to find your orientation to be other than North American, European or Australian, as most authors on this site seem to be (I am Canadian, myself). You seem to have a very good grasp of the English language (or else you have a very good translator). I did not notice any glaring grammatical errors, and few, if any, spelling errors (I was an aerospace technical writer by profession, before my retirement).
I wish you all success in your writing, and I am looking forward to how your story develops. Good Luck!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review this story. I am indeed not North-American, European nor Australian at all, you've made me a little more confident on my English proficiency as well. It is not my first, not even second language. I consciously try to steer away from classical tropes when writing, as I've noticed most authors in temperate regions weave their stories around the passing of seasons, something that is utterly alien to tropical people like me. We have different mental landmarks. I hope this story will manage to entertain, excite and surprise you and other readers of your background. Enjoy!