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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2018 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Cleaner

This story is still cute, and it will be a challenge for Lucas and Melina to understand eachothers language. But Lucas is a fast learner, or at least I hope.

I am curious about the place he landed. He probably won't be able to go back to Brazil, but at least he is safe with Melina. 

Switching perspective back and forth between Lucas and Melina is also nice because it gives us an isight into the thoughts of both. A well thought out move.

Also, thank you for writing, I really enjoyed these chapters.

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