Date: September 01 2018 2:14 AM Title: Lesson #0: Prologue
I like this. Good writing, so good action. I do like that she feels a bit bad, and that she still cares about her sister. I'd like to actually see that played up a bit more, like giving her a nice meal, nicer than what she would normally give a tiny
[Report This]Date: August 26 2018 10:15 AM Title: Lesson #0: Prologue
I really hope Molly becomes a Shrinkee too, after she tortured her sister a bit more, then the mother can have fun with both of them.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I had that idea some time ago too, but that's a bit far into the future so I haven't given it much thought yet.
Date: August 25 2018 11:46 PM Title: Lesson #0: Prologue
very interesting start!
Date: August 25 2018 4:50 PM Title: Lesson #0: Prologue
Thanks for replying! I can't really remember what I'd commented, but I'll just say I'm sure Molly will be a kind and benevolent master to her....pfffft! Probably not. Anna also doesn't seem very tough so she may be in for a difficult time. I'm sure it'll end well for both of them...eventually....maybe.
[Report This]Date: August 25 2018 4:39 PM Title: Lesson #0: Prologue
Long live Molly.
Date: August 25 2018 3:42 PM Title: Lesson #0: Prologue
Great start so far. Can't wait to read the nexts parts. I am especially excited about the scat part!
I really hope her sister is going to do some really nasty stuff to her.
Thanks for the story an keep going
Author's Response:
Haha thanks, I'll try to give consistent updates.
Date: August 25 2018 1:50 PM Title: Lesson #0: Prologue
Thanks, I'll keep updating it.
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Okay, so mistake on my part, I accidently deleted "NotSirk's review so I'll reply to it over here.
1. Firstly, I was trying to keep the prologue as short as possible so yes it did seem a bit fast, I'll write more in the next chapters so don't worry.
2. True, there was a lack of emotional depth since they were sisters, so I'll try to cover for that in the oncoming chapters.
3. And as for your question about the hate for shrinkers? Well, they are tiny and deprived of their rights, being tiny makes them a burden and having no rights.... well you can see where that's going. And this is the environment these people have grown in so yeah, the indifference or uncaring attitude for them is pretty much ingrained?
Date: August 25 2018 11:05 AM Title: Lesson #0: Prologue
Love sibling rivalries, looking forward to this
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'll try to get the next chapter done in the next 2 or 3 days.