[Report This]Date: January 10 2020 9:05 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
Awesome Chapter!
I think the ball is in Jenny's court, I think she has feeling of at least friendship for both John and Monica. That she allowed her 'friends' to do what they did to John, well I doubt she had that planned, and it likely made her uncomfortable my guess is she thought is was 'normal' high school behavior. She should of cut it off when they were cornering him on the 'house party', I think even though she's a reality warper and has strong feelings for John she likely did what other popular girls do when their nerd friends are picked on by their popular friends, clam up and hope that each can see the good in the other.
Zoe and her clique baring Jenny's influnce are going to stay 'mean girls'. As bad as the situation with Monica is, it's important that Jenny makes a choice, is her true friend John worth all her easy popularity? Are her 'friends' like Zoe going to make her happy? satisify her needs, actually challange her and in their own way make her better? I would like to see her confront them without tricks and if need be have an actual break with those 'friends'. Better she has one true friend then dozens of 'hangers-on' who can't comprehend her.
Which gets to Monica, I think she is being to know what is going on, that her memories are come through. Maybe she can't believe John allows all the things that happened to happen and that he stopped trying to 'help' her remember.
I think Jenny has the most to lose, she can return to things as they were before John. She can try to force things which overtime will be even worse as it will be Jenny and everyone else, which will leave her loney and guilty, possilby barely able to live with herself depending on how much harm she does in forcing things. She needs to show John that she's willing to sacrifice, not merely reset, that her friends were so cold and went out from the start to humilate John while she sat back (though she was uncomfortable for him and felt for him, she still didn't act until after he was completely destoried and humilated by Monica's actions).
Jenny has a lot to choose, as does John and Monica, but Jenny is the one who has to move things and make decisions on what is vauable to her and what she can live with. She may only have John as a friend, she may not be able to have him and Monica beyond that, and if she is going to stay with John she is likely going to have to cut lose her 'friends' like Zoe, and to be a friend to John actual endure their scron and loss of 'popularity' in order to show him that she is actaully his friend. He knows what she is capable of and if she just blocks her group from harming him or wipes their memory then he's just a toy for her. If she chooses him over them and endures being outside of the 'popular' girls for him then he knows it is real and if she is willing to step aside for Monica then again he knows she truly vaules and cares for him, that he's not just an amusing toy.
Again great chapter, can't wait for the next, thank you!
[Report This]Date: December 19 2019 1:17 AM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
Great Chapter, Jenny is still match-making with Monica, would like the ideal a Throuple! Don't think Jenny is shy and could slowly bring Monica into the 'know' and I don't think the giantess goddess wants to give up her little one (john). I think Jenny would be best with it (if it goes wrong she can at least 'partially' reset), John maybe confused (likely happy but confused), Monica I think wants John as her friend if not more to be happy... So, would like John and Jenny, but a Throuple with Monica would be cute as well. Thank you for your awesome work, can't wait until the next chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: October 15 2019 7:40 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
Please continue, love Jenny's way of thinking, or maybe movement on John's Flank, please write more! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: October 09 2019 12:19 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
Awesome Chapter! Jenny is starting to move the 'friendship' along...
Wonder if either will not when the line beteewn freind/boy-girl friend/lover gets crossed. Maybe when Jenny is 'taking care of' and itch with John on top of a very large building... Jenny's pleased moans reverbating through states...
[Report This]Date: October 08 2019 3:26 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
Great Chapter, Jenny and John are enjoying the other quite a bit, it might not be long be Jenny finds Monica a new friend and keeps John all to her divine self :-) Don't think she's reached that point consciencailly, but the more they do and the deeper they 'dive' one 'game' it may just 'happen'. Again great chapter!
[Report This]Date: October 08 2019 2:45 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
HE'S ALIVE! I've been waiting for another chapter for ages and I totally get why you didn't carry off from the previous chapter. Love that this chapter helped clear (most of) John's doubts and make him more comfortable with the more sexual side of things. Very cute, very hot, and very fun. Makes me genuinely wish he'll end up with Jenny instead of Monica, hehe. Can't wait to see what else you got cooked up!
[Report This]Date: April 12 2019 2:57 AM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
Like the interactions, if Jenny is going to try to hook Monica and John up, it might help if Monica is 'in' on Jenny's idenity. No one would believe her if she 'told', and she may understand things better.
Think most of the reviews are right Jenny likes John a lot, but Jenny is trying to be a good friend first and let john have his shot. If Monica is of a simular character as Jenny... where do two good girls who want to help (Jenny) or what's best (Monica) for John do when the other woman is trying to hook them up with the guy?
please more... :-)
[Report This]Date: April 10 2019 7:00 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
He lives, yaaaaas! Super fun chapter and can't wait for the rest of it. I know your boi is into Monica, but I hope he ends up with Jenny anyway. Thanks for continuing this awesome story!
Author's Response:
No problem. Hopefully that's the last time I disappear for anytime longer than a month. I know I need to let the creative juices flow when they feel like it and not force it, but anything more than a month is too long
[Report This]Date: January 20 2019 2:49 AM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
Great story telling Reminds me of one of the classic giantess /shrink stories from yesteryear
If women come like Jenny I need I to find one. Lol
Keep up the good work .
[Report This]Date: January 17 2019 5:28 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
Still loving the interaction, Jenny is trying to show John that his a good guy, John ain't quite buying. Jenny I think is trying to be a good girl and let John go after his dream girl, though I sense some time in the future, maybe soon that Jenny will admit that she's 'kidnapping' him for other reasons then just to play out Giantess fantasies. The good friend who's hooking you up being the one who wants to hook up with you "that never happens..." right :-)
Anyway I don't think Jenny will be able to keep the promise of "that will never happen again" with her needs and desires, she might of shown too much, but she had no issue of showing it... Great chapter.
Date: January 17 2019 3:46 AM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
Amazing Story! Hope he can make a relationship with Jenny! And together they can have more fun in the City‘s :) the Last Chapter with der Army was great! Excellent work.
Author's Response:
thank you very much. I'm trying to do different takes on typical giantess scenarios. Giantess vs army has been done plenty of times. This time it's "giantess plays with army as she goes about her day".
Date: January 10 2019 12:42 AM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
The story is great. I especially like the focus on storytelling and character development. You really have a way with words. Even if I am not a huge fan of vore, chapter 8 & 9 kept me on the edge of my seat. It was great. I also love the gentle aspect too. It help develop a nice relationship between the two main characters. I'm starting to wonder how kinky things will get between them.
Author's Response:
Thank you. It's a high compliment when you still enjoy the chapters involving fetishes that aren't your own. I'll be trying to mix up all of the different fetish aspects so hopefully I hit one that's more your thing. But don't worry, story and characters are always going to come first. My newest chapter, for example. Check it out. And thank you for reading and commenting
[Report This]Date: January 01 2019 3:17 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
I have tried resisting to read this story. I didn't really like the title, but I also saw it was by you, so it must be good.
I finally caved in to the pressure to read it, and my god its a good story.
Jenny is perfectly overpowered, like giantess should be. At the same time, she is also nice and evil/mischievous at the same time. Secretly and dominantly bullying the school while also appearing as the nicest angel...
And as for the pacing, I didn't really notice it because I just started reading now that multiple chapters were already released and your writing is so good that it just reads away like nothing.
And yeah good point at the end, Jenny missed her lunch.
Also, thanks for writing and I'm looking forward to many more chapters!
Author's Response:
If you're wondering what the title means, it's to signify that literally any kind of scenario can happen in this story, and John will have to go along with it. (dropping a hint here that things are going to get creative in later chapters). But I'm glad to hear that you like it. I always appreciate comments from those who enjoyed other stories I've written.
As for Jenny, I don't know if I'd call her a bully. Maybe she walks a fine line, but she only takes enjoyment from being a giantess, not so much hurting other people.
[Report This]Date: December 29 2018 10:58 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
Well I like everything but the vore, litterally thousands of stories on this site all about VORE. Hope you aren't setting up the ending of the story. Even while 'consuming' him it seems Jenny is still very fond of John, and from previous chapters you stated she doesn't kill, so I am hoping that these chapters are fan service for the Vore folks and we can get back to some very high qaulity story telling (with a gentle Jenny)!!!
The vore kills my rating, everything else was 5 stars, with vore down to 3.5 sorry. Hope the next few chapters return to your awesome story. Thank you.
Author's Response:
well sorry to hear that vore's not your thing, and you probably won't like the next chapter. But when I made this story, I promised all kinds of scenarios, so you're gonna see a little of almost everything. All I can say is vore won't be the main focus of the story but it will be in it (hope you have nothing against feet because that's my thing). Jenny is going to stay gentle, but keep in mind she has a mischevious tendancy. She likes to play the giantess in all sorts of scenarios. I'm going for a variety. You're going to see her be the self-appointed "antagonist" and the gentle giantess. Keep in mind, she's only having fun though.
Thanks for being honest with your review, by the way.
[Report This]Date: December 26 2018 7:32 AM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
Oh man this ia an awesome story, please continue it!!! Thank you.
[Report This]Date: December 14 2018 8:16 AM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
This is great stuff. I like how you've been able to make a scenario where just about anything can happen while still keeping it focused on relatable characters, so that it feels grounded. Also how most of the chapters have included hints or foreshadowing that there are other shoes yet to drop, which is important to keep it from getting stale. (I didn't care for the gym class chapter as much as the others, partly because the scenario wasn't really my thing and also because it lacked that feeling of unfolding mystery.)
The off-handed mention that she's held the Earth in her hands "a few times" is a nice demonstration that sometimes telling is more effective than showing.
Author's Response:
I really appreciate the compliment, thank you. This story was born out of just a bunch of random giantess scenarios that I couldn't figure out how to fit together. Now, just as you've said, anything is free range in this story, and I've got some ideas still brewing. Relateable characters are my favorite part, too. I need the characters to feel unique and real, or else things get stale early on. So I hope I can keep up with that
[Report This]Date: December 07 2018 1:53 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
Another awesome chapter! Looks like Jenny is 'liking' John (John don't fall for the friends with benefits, if she's already there she DIGS you! Monica, she and her folks maybe moving to the other side of the country soon... Jenny won't hurt or kill her, but dad being promoted to clear her playingfield...) yeah Mr. Loya needs to be careful about Jenny's heart or he maybe working in a Mike Rowe job...(I can see Jenny being nice, gentle and playful while playing dirty...)
Again great chapter, can't have too many great gentle giantess!!!
Author's Response:
You make some cool speculations, and it's entirely possible that the story could go that way, or another. I'll get working on it so you won't have to wait long. Till then, thanks for the comments, they keep me motivated.
[Report This]Date: December 05 2018 4:19 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
I will keep it SIMPLE-AWESOME STORY!!! More playful, gentle goddess Jenny!!!
[Report This]Date: December 04 2018 7:53 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
Oh my God that was an awesome chapter, I would love to spend a gym peroid having Jenny rule it with understated grace and charm, all the while letting me climb on her... Keep her cute, smart, gentle and running things! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you my friend. Yeah I really enjoy playful giantesses as well. Too many people on this site seem to like cruel dominatrixes. Give me a gentle, but playful, giantess any day
[Report This]Date: November 27 2018 6:33 PM Title: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens
Love the story so far, concerned about the Vore aspect, would really like to see Jenny stay a gentle giantess. She enjoys her games and some are riske but she makes sure people arent harmed by what she does. Would like to have John becoming an additional conscience for her and maybe being rewarded with the "power to satisfy a goddess". It's light so far, please don't make it into a downpour on moonless midnight. Thanks.
Author's Response:
don't worry. I've taken all of that into consideration and I know exactly how the future fetish aspects are going to be handled. From a story point of view, her powers will probably come off as a Deus Ex Machina, but that's what I was going for. Abilities that are purely for creating a variety of different scenarios without sacrificing the gentle giantess aspect that I love so much. Hopefully I'll be able to keep the characters interesting enough so you guys won't get bored. Thanks for the comment, btw